"Your Love Meant Everything To Me (And Still Does)
I see your face, and my heart skips a beat.
Recalling how you broke me, I force back a tear.
You walk towards me, but my mind is somewhere else.
Memories cloud my mind, of you and me.
Once again, I’m back in reality, face to face with the guy who built me up, and tore me down.
Do you ever feel guilty that I’m dying from loving you?
While you’re off screwing her, do you ever think of you and I?
I see your eyes, and I remember the passion that used to fill them by glancing at me.
Your lips remind me of that first kiss.
Your arms should be wrapped around me instead of that tramp.
Memories cloud my mind, and slowly, tears form in my eyes.
I’m not afraid to show you how I feel.
I love you, and the feelings are not returned.
After she destroyed you, I mended your heart.
But in the end, you went back.
What makes you think that this time, it will end different?
I’ll always be here, waiting for you.
Though, I know that she will have you forever.
Now, as she is holding you,
I’m at home thinking about how my world is in her arms, and not mine.
Your love meant everything to me, and still does.
x.X This is my first poem, and I’m not sure if it’s good or not, so I would really like some majorly honest critiquing. Be brutal, and don’t hold back X.x
Your Love Meant Everything To Me (And Still Does)
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