You right there..

You right there..

by Spirit on 10-26-2009 7:10 pm

err.. this is my first poem so well.. leave comments if i can better it so.... yea... hope you will like it Smile


I see you there, with that guy
You kiss him i cry
I cry silently under the shadow of this dead tree
I look a picture of you and me you are there but where are me?

The love for me you've lost somewhere in this dark lake
This dark lake made out of my tears
But i hold my love to you in my hands though it kills my heart
It makes it bleed, it makes it scarred

because i know that you will never take me back
I'm lost in myself, in my mind, in my heart
It will be like this everyday
Until the day of my grave

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Re: You right there..

by SNL on 10-26-2009 8:32 pm

Spirit wrote:
I look at our picture.. but wheres me?

I don't know, the last part didn't sound right.
Keep working on it, I like your imagery though.

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