What I Could Never Be

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What I Could Never Be

by Bretts Silent Princess on 10-08-2008 9:18 pm

What I Could Never Be

Let's see, her name is Tiffany?
Or maybe Billie with an "ie"?
Maybe Sarah-Lee Jayne with a "y", for a bit of class, like?
Because she's one of those girls who go to one of those schools,
Where they say "OMG" and all pretend they're virgins.
Beaches all day and she shops at Supre,
Mummy's a model, Daddy's a surgeon.

And she took away my boyfriend, easily filled my spot.
And part of me thinks he loves her 'cause she's everything I'm NOT.

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by XxXChrisXxX on 10-08-2008 9:40 pm

This is good

"God made pot. Man made beer. Who do you trust?"

Fantasy. its something f a k e
something un-real
what we dream
what we imagine
what isn't there.
what is a lie. to our imagination
y o u for example.

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RE: What I Could Never Be

by vampirefreaksarz on 10-10-2008 12:01 pm

wow i really like it Exclamation

Now I will tell you what I've done for you
50 thousand tears I've cried
Screaming Deceiving and Bleeding for you
And you still won't hear me

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by BloodCellsPixelate on 10-10-2008 12:12 pm

This is rather amazing.

ox

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RE: What I Could Never Be

by beautifullyxbroken on 10-10-2008 3:53 pm

I very much like this, indeed.
Good job.

Carve your heart out yourself. Hopelessness is your cell. Since you've drawn out all these lines, are you protected from trying times? Man, it takes a silly girl to lie about the dreams she has. Lord, it takes a lonely one to wish that she had never dreamt at all.

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