Then we fly (criticism please?)

Lyrics, tell me what you think please?

All that said and all thats written,
All the lies turned to truths,
Our destiny Our fate
Sealed with our dreams,
Never to be reached.
Getting shot down before given the chance to fly.
This is reality we live in,
Fear.
We are afraid to reach our dreams,
(Fear)
Afraid to be ourselves,
(Fear)
Afraid to speak
(Fear)
Afraid to stand
(Fear)
We fear all our life,
Then we fly.
She said:
(She said)
"I want to believe,
(Believe)
I want to believe,
(Believe)
There's more to life than this"
(Is there?)
She took my hand,
I took hers,
We ran away
(Away from the fear and into a new reality)
Where promises are golden,
And dreams are never forgotten.
Where we all are given the chance.
Then we fly.
(Fly, fly away from the world of pain)
She said:
(She said)
"I want to believe,
(Believe)
I want to believe,
(Believe)
There's more to life than this"
(Is there?)
She waited all her life for that chance,
Then she flew.
(she flew)

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This is actually pretty good, kudos to you. Better than what I've read.

O: this is really good, tehe(;