first let me tell u it did start as a poem nd thats y im posting it but it turned in to a hole lot of emotion in one big mess trying to make a point!!!




They say the ones who are hardest to love are the ones who need it the most! When I think of all the time its made sense to me, I realize its true! Like the guy who tried to rap my friend, the hurting kid who cheated on me and just kept coming back for more, the man who abused my cousin and left her alone with three kids to pick up the pieces, the guy who knocked up her sister then left her homeless and pregnant, the boys who had rapped my sister-in-law and left her to fear another day they thretent to kill my brother, they all were looking for sympathy in all the wrong places, they were hurting on the inside trying to find away out.
The guy who had tried to rap my best friend is now lying in a mental hospital bed tring to recover from an almost suicide,all he needed was someone to reach out and care. The kid who had cheated on me all he needed was someone to look up to, he too had tried to kill him self, he is fatherless with out anyone to show him right from wrong!

yep i have been cheated on nd i know its not worth it

yea it started out as a poem but it sounded alot better in my head...

If it's not a poem, it doesn't belong in this thread, ftw.

ZRC wrote: If it's not a poem, it doesn't belong in this thread, ftw.

blahhhhhhhhh
like i said twice befor it started out as one!!!!!!!!
geeeessssss..........

that is what happend to me in the past. i am sorry for what happend

PunkRockAngel4Life wrote: Wow, I don't know what to say...
Except, I think it would have been better if you posted you poem in verse things.
You know? The same way I'm typing this reply.
& Also, it doesn't seem very poem-ish so I maybe would've posted it on a different board\forum thing.
But than again it may not of seemed poem-ish to me because of the way it was typed.
I also have been cheated on and I would like to believe what you said in the poem was ture.
But cheaters aren't worth it.
& I'm sorry all of thoughs things happened to you.
I'm also sorry for the long reply and if I seemed harsh

You mean stanzas? O__O

And it's a nice poem thing =]