no big deal
i do it all the time
this pain is real
this pain i feel
you see this heart?
well, its falling apart.
feedbackk...
shortt n sweet.
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shortt n sweet.
by Xx razOr blade kiiss xX on 11-12-2009 3:33 pm
false smiles, little lies
no big deal
i do it all the time
this pain is real
this pain i feel
you see this heart?
well, its falling apart.
feedbackk...
no big deal
i do it all the time
this pain is real
this pain i feel
you see this heart?
well, its falling apart.
feedbackk...
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Good job on the ryhming!
by brandyrules101 on 12-09-2009 10:29 am
I personally think that it was awesome, I mean i can totally relate to it and its hard to make poems that ryhme and actually make them sound good! Good Job! Keep Writing! 
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