shortt n sweet.

shortt n sweet.

by Xx razOr blade kiiss xX on 11-12-2009 3:33 pm

false smiles, little lies
no big deal
i do it all the time
this pain is real
this pain i feel
you see this heart?
well, its falling apart.


feedbackk... Very Happy

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Good job on the ryhming!

by brandyrules101 on 12-09-2009 10:29 am

I personally think that it was awesome, I mean i can totally relate to it and its hard to make poems that ryhme and actually make them sound good! Good Job! Keep Writing! Cool

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by Xx razOr blade kiiss xX on 01-12-2010 11:47 am

Thankyouuu ^^

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