shitty poem I wrote

shitty poem I wrote

by Violent Jmann on 11-24-2008 11:15 pm

From dust to dawn
We dance all night
I must find
If she is right
My one true love
Has had enough
For me there's pain
For them it's laime

She loves me not
But she says I'm hot
He loves me lots
They call him puff
As the sunset appears
She sits along in tears

For I love her much
She wants to be touched
She loves me back
I love her back
We love black

He bleeds to death
She cries to death
Her name was beth
But now she's dead
They both bleed to death
Thy blood is deaf
After they Wedd
They were DEAD


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by mcr666 on 11-25-2008 2:08 pm

By saying it's a shitty poem you're only going to get shitty comments.
*eye roll*

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by shadowslight on 11-25-2008 2:11 pm

Um, i think its ok...

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