She is...

What do you think is the best ending?

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She is...

by the one whos not smiling on 12-24-2007 12:40 pm

She is the one who puts the sunrise in my morning
She is the one who stops the rain from falling
She is the one who clears away the sadness,
and relaces it with her kind, honest smile

She is the one who always has a kind word to say
She is the one who never has anything bad said
She is the one who drys up the tears,
of anyone that is crying

She is the one who always puts a smile on anyones face
She is the one who makes the sun rise, and the moon set
She is the one who puts the rainbow in the morning,
and is the pot of gold at the end.

She is the one who is so kind
She is the one who is so sweet
She is the one who is lying in that grave,
it should have been me.

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She was the one with all the secrets
She was the one with all the grief
She was the one who never showed her feelings,
we didnt know it went so wrong.

we were the one's who found her in the morning
We were the one's who had to see what had happened
we were the one's who finaly understood,
as we saw her lying there, the blood draining from her arms.

She was the one who puts the sunrise in my morning
She was the one who stops the rain from falling
She is the one who will never be forgotten,
She is the one and only, My one and only.


I'm coming my love




OR

She is the one who puts the sunrise in my morning
She is the one who stops the rain from falling
She is the one who clears away the sadness,
and relaces it with her kind, honest smile

She is the one who always has a kind word to say
She is the one who never has anythin bad said
She is the one who drys up the tears,
of anyone that is crying

She is the one who always puts a smile on anyones face
She is the one who makes the sun rise, and the moon set
She is the one who puts the rainbow in the morning,
and is the pot of gold at the end.

She is the one who is so kind
She is teh one who is so sweet
She is the one who is lying in that grave,
it should have been me.

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I was the one driving that car
i was the one who had too many to drink
I was the one who decided to take that shortcut,
and it was the shortcut to her death

I am the one who will set it right,
I am the one with the blood draining from my arms,
I am the one with the family who will be mourning,
but then it will be right
this nightmare will end
and i will be were i deserve

Im coming my love...


PLease tell me what you think... i need to know what endings better....

Cheers
You've dissapeared


like a light
gone out in a darkened room


but there is still that faint glimmer


that faint sign of life...

the one whos not smiling
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by XEmomunchkinX on 12-24-2007 1:07 pm

you write well i like it
yes i need help out of this grave that i dug

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by EMO TIONAL on 01-03-2008 11:23 pm



<33 it!


I want to show it to the world,
This meaning of pain,
This feeling of hurt,
This crying of tears,
This bleeding of blood,
This accomplishment.

</33

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by xXBlankPoloroidXx on 01-04-2008 1:17 am

beautiful work
Live, Love, Burn, Die...

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