tbh it is a verry good poem but could be insulting to many girls.
personally though i agree. the cutting thing. ive been there done that and it just creates stupid reminders
basically everyone has t ...

i really liked it

keep up the good work

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WOW... THTS RLLY GOOD... YOU'RE SOO TALENTED .. I LOVED THT

amazing ! x loves x

iloveit!! i rekon its well good good

omg lol i done that to a bratz head but thats rather sound!!

wow the effects are well good... please post a photo of your artwork id love to see it

thats well good

keep practicing your lyrics are good

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hey dont be so harsh!!
i like your poem but you do need to type larger so that we can read it easier and tiding up grammer wont hurt
but its good basis good luck x

i reli like it xxx

mirror mirror on the wall
whose the fairest or them all?
is it the girl with the golden smile?
or the one who talks for a very long while?
maby the chick with the surf blue eyes?
shurely not her ...

i used to feel exactly the same...its so easy to get caught up in a web. and when yhuur there yhuu cant get out. until it hurts so bad yhuu give up careing. <-- thats how it worked for me anyway!! ...

brightens up the section a bit!! lol :L :L :L

well....i know ard but try to hang on... i was in a similar position and i was reli gonna do it. but trust me when i say lifes worth getting through it. it may take time but maby it will be forgiven, ...

put realy simply.
but good point on how people cant see the people that Are there for them.
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its good, with a good structure and all but like to me when i read it it seems to be realy repeative.
good luck with achieving your dreams.
xxx