Its really good... clear message
Keep it up.
All the best, Andrew.

Updates: New Poems
- Die (short)
- I Think
- Untitled
- Not My Place
- It Hurts
- Wants

I really like it... heaps of emotion and likely situations. Keep writing.
All the best. Andrew

disturbing... i hate it

slander much

Update: New Poems
- Walking in the Moonlight
- Something Right
- I Can't Wait
- Wicked Fate

hey
I worked it out.. ish
Soz, thx

http://forum.emobucket.com/fearless-poetry-t42927.html

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Neat stuff, love a rhyming poem with a clear message. Keep writing like this, I'll keep reading.
All the best. Andrew

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your a pretty good writer, I like how you set it out. I preferred the first one, I always appeal to rhyme. Message recieved, it was great. Keep it up
All the best. Andrew

Update: New Poems
- Something About You
- Fill Me
- Finally (short poem)

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far out this is heaps good. seriously... i dunno what to say.
heaps clear point, each paragraph continuing the story, not mumbo jumbo.
i love it! Keep going man.
All the best. Andrew

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cause its a song, its difficult to get a full understanding of it without a sample, but in terms of the lyrics, its Heaps good! Keep it up
All the best. Andrew

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pro skater hey? sounds good
I'm Andrew, great to meet ya.
I'm almost always in the poetry forum, so if you're looking for a good read, check me out
All the best. Andrew

Update: New Poems
- Before I Met You
- Ladder