Thanks for the advice, it's much appreciated. I definitely need help improving
my writing skills lol.

Changed my mind about this one.

Here is another poem. This one kinda hints at some emotional turmoil, but over all is kinda happy.
So enjoy. Oh and if an ideas for titles come to mind, they would be much appreciated. Thanks


T ...

Thanks. Depression really is something hard to live with and it seems you understand that Fearless.
I've been reading your poems as well and they describe the troubles of depression perfectly. I've ...

Defiantly one of the best.
Much deserved props

I think she was just wondering where the poetry started...

It's ok, i don't see it ether.

Well thank you, i guess it was better than i thought =]

Here is a couple more....


[Thank You Note]
You leave me speechless
I have no idea what to say
All I know is
I’ll make it today
...

It's been awhile thought i would add a few...just need to find the rest.
Not too sure about this one. It's sounds...wrong lol. No way to explain it, just
didn't feel this one.


[At a loss for ...

It's not my usual style and it's more of an out of the blue moment for me...

[Not sure what to title this one..]

I know this boy
With a wonderful grin
He’s captured my heart
And that’s just ...

Surely someone's heard of them, right?

Well Red is a christian rock group with a sound that has been much compared to Linkin Park.
Hard to believe being christian and all... Red does have a few ch ...

Tell me about it...

Sadly though when i write this is all that comes to mind. I do
have a happy one, but i afraid to put it up lol

In the Shady Park

Sitting in the shady park
A figure sits amongst the dark
No cars, no noise, no dogs to bark
Alone, afraid, not leaving a mark

He's scared, you know it in his tears
Jus ...

Well i love this song its amazing!!

But are you the type of person that simply loves the song for those first
few lines, or do you actually "get" the whole song...

Ohhh by the way so ...

uh....awesome?
Try keeping this BS to yourself from now on, ok?

Lol...I meant that i've said it twice.
See, you're pretty clever though turning my words around on me
You should be able to write something with all that cleverness :O