Read my poemmm

Read my poemmm

by xxblindfoldedsuicidexxx on 10-10-2008 8:59 pm


Death is crawling.
The baby doll is falling.
Down the stairwell its calling.
For my love to save it.

The doll is bleeding.
Get the bandage.
Love so needing.
Hearts so dear.
Take my faith.
Im all thats here.


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RE: Read my poemmm

by PunkRockAngel4Life on 10-10-2008 9:01 pm

I love him<3

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Re: RE: Read my poemmm

by KittensKill on 10-10-2008 9:05 pm

PunkRockAngel4Life wrote: I love him<3

what?

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by gothicHarlequin on 10-10-2008 10:30 pm

I liked it but I am not entirely certain I understood what it meant....?

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by xxblindfoldedsuicidexxx on 10-10-2008 11:40 pm

wells its basically a metafore of me feeling very alone and icolated as a child and then as a teen i started cutting. im the doll.

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by Bretts Silent Princess on 10-12-2008 2:25 am

I didn't like it.
If I had to choose between loving Max and breathing, I would tell him I love him in my last breath.

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by Roylance on 10-12-2008 5:19 am

Bretts Silent Princess wrote: I didn't like it.

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by Minx on 10-12-2008 5:45 am

Not really the best.

Mudkip and Casper have my heart. <3
Mudkip wrote: Well I just so happen to be with someone rather quite amazing ahmmhmhmm.

Matt + Kitty For Ever yah.

casperONFIRE wrote: Because you already stole my heart, Kitty.
<3<3


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