im real new so how do i post poetry here???im real confused...Razor kissed wrists .
by xxluvemoxx on 04-05-2008 4:37 pm
that was kick ass i swear...i wrote something like it before i read it but it was about blood im real new so how do i post poetry here???im real confused...
im real new so how do i post poetry here???im real confused...-
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by God on 04-05-2008 4:50 pm
Wow, it's a shocker so many people claimed they "loved" it. But perhaps it's just because of the touchy subject.
Your writing is horrendous. Your meter is as far off as you can get; your rhyming is sporadic. A thesaurus is your friend, by the way. No need to go back to second grade vocabulary. Plus the idea is so unbelievably cliché. Rediculous!
1/10.
Your writing is horrendous. Your meter is as far off as you can get; your rhyming is sporadic. A thesaurus is your friend, by the way. No need to go back to second grade vocabulary. Plus the idea is so unbelievably cliché. Rediculous!
1/10.
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by Cinderemo on 04-05-2008 5:10 pm
wow. that was so true. it hit my life dead on....kinda sad i know........its nice to know that there're some people out there who can write what they feel and not what they think others want them to write. thx! *ehug*
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by lifeishopeless on 04-06-2008 5:13 pm
OMG I LOVE THIS POEM!!!! it like totally fits me wow AMAZING!!!!!!!
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by surprise suicidex on 04-07-2008 10:39 am
Amazing.
Its like you really wrote what you felt every day. <3
Its like you really wrote what you felt every day. <3
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by Softlittledropsofpain on 06-04-2008 4:59 am
Dude thats so powerful
its like razors are these tools for destruction and kisses are so gentle
fuck thats amazing i hope you are publishing these thigns
its like razors are these tools for destruction and kisses are so gentle
fuck thats amazing i hope you are publishing these thigns
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by LilRedMemories on 06-13-2008 7:31 pm
omg your poem is awesome and i relate to the end of it saddly.... anyways ive read your poem about 5 times now and i love it even more everytime
keep writtin please
keep writtin please
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by Ebony on 06-13-2008 10:42 pm
great poem i'd have to say cuz i know the feelings portrayed in it. keep up the great work! 
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by xXlove hurtsXx on 06-13-2008 10:46 pm
wow... this was...
'knock me speechless' good (=
yea, I can relate, very deep.
very good.
'knock me speechless' good (=
yea, I can relate, very deep.
very good.
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by micht on 06-14-2008 12:57 am
OMG i LOVE this!!!!
i know exactly how you feel/felt. i cut too, i'm on antidepressants and they're working but i've missed a few days and the urge just comes back and its hard to get over...
i know exactly how you feel/felt. i cut too, i'm on antidepressants and they're working but i've missed a few days and the urge just comes back and its hard to get over...
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by emosuicide on 06-19-2008 11:31 am
Thank you to everyone who has read and commented on my poem.
It all means a lot to me .
I thank you guys ALL SO MUCH.
And to let you all know, I am going to continue to write!
It all means a lot to me .
I thank you guys ALL SO MUCH.
And to let you all know, I am going to continue to write!
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