I Love You

Hey guys this is just something i wrote, ive never really tried poetry before so...yeah it probably sucks but i dont know anyway here it is. Tell me what you think.

my eyes look all around
but all they can focuse on is you
but where are you
why have you left me to be alone

my flesh cries out for you
every moment as it gets cut open
by this cold knife as my tears mixed with blood
drop from my fingertips

My heart cries every day and night for you
my loveing kassie where are you
the cold dark guns calls for my life
the grave awaits me

I dream of a time and place where we are together
where i can kiss your loveing lips and feel whole again
but is this a dream that may come true?
or just a haunting tease

maybe i will find another
maybe my heart will repair
but right now i still love you
and my eyes will burn with tears untill you return

will the winter wind bring you home
or just leave me cold and alone
will we someday hold each other again
or will my body lie cold and lifeless and my corpse screaming

I love you.

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Hmm well its excellent for your first try. Keep writing.

my flesh cries out for you
every moment as it gets cut open
by this cold knife as my tears mixed with blood
drop from my fingertips

I like that part