Bitter-Sweet-Heart

Though they say peoms on cutting are negative, I find it's the way people take it, not the words. Please enjoy.

Cut
The first cut of life is always the hardest,
We find the world not one we deal with,
And so in agony,
In privacy the first cut is born.
Rip
We become more solitude after that,
as the blade rips across our skin,
no one sees,
no one hears,
As they say,
Rest In Peace in blood colored tears.
Slash
We become desperate,
Searchingwithin ourselves,
We are nothing but slaves,
To a world,
Where nothing is right.

And soon the world blurs as life fades away,
Let the blood freely fall,
By the time we die nothing is left, But a memoir past of a bitter sweet heart.
But tear that out and we have nothing but our fake smiles.

Please do not take this peom without the consent of the author. She just might have to send her hell flames at you. XD

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hmm pretty good, well written

Thanks very much ^^

lol np

Hey if U have the time Y dont U go check out my poetry? I need some comments... Either i'm not getting any because i suck or because people R jealous. LOL Its called "My Life ( Part 2 added )

its good, i admit that. but maybe you could find another way to describe things, other than self harm.

lawl.