These are really good
They offer a different style to a lot of what i have read
They stand out
<3 :) Poems By UnknownFace :( </3
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by XXtokieXX on 10-06-2009 7:34 pm
once again i had to come and read these there just that good! I really like them and if I knew you i would run up to you and try to steal the poems muahaha then run away >.< but your not that lucky xD =P but i still love them Heres a new poem idea: make it kinda sad like crying in the rain so know one will no you no stuff like that hope this helps or some love poems those are the best 
♥ xxtokiexx
♥ xxtokiexx
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by UnknownFace on 10-12-2009 3:46 pm
Here's one I wrote in math class 
The Wolf's Cry
Far echoes the lone wolf's howl,
A cry laced with sorrow,
A cry that strikes back the winds fierce growl,
This wolf he calls for tomorrow.
Strong in heart but week in soul,
The cry it's heard by all,
The cry it's passed, it's forum full,
A lady wold strides tall.
Lady wold come and track him down,
He needs you to guide him to shore,
Lady wold come and turn his frown,
So the wolves are long no more.
The Wolf's Cry
Far echoes the lone wolf's howl,
A cry laced with sorrow,
A cry that strikes back the winds fierce growl,
This wolf he calls for tomorrow.
Strong in heart but week in soul,
The cry it's heard by all,
The cry it's passed, it's forum full,
A lady wold strides tall.
Lady wold come and track him down,
He needs you to guide him to shore,
Lady wold come and turn his frown,
So the wolves are long no more.
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by UnknownFace on 10-12-2009 9:46 pm
*Tries for sad love poem*
Sunday night, I meet you, something new I see,
Monday night, I great you, and fall in love again.
Tuesday night, I need you, I ask if you need me,
Wednesday night, I hold you, as you answer softly.
Thursday night, I scold you, we start to drift free
Friday night, I hate you, and you hate me back,
Saturday night, I miss you, let's start at Sunday again.
Sunday night, I meet you, something new I see,
Monday night, I great you, and fall in love again.
Tuesday night, I need you, I ask if you need me,
Wednesday night, I hold you, as you answer softly.
Thursday night, I scold you, we start to drift free
Friday night, I hate you, and you hate me back,
Saturday night, I miss you, let's start at Sunday again.
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by UnknownFace on 10-23-2009 12:11 pm
Rain falls quickly
Face the facts, the rain falls quickly,
Trace your tracks, and run through the dampened streets.
Try your best, find someone broken,
Strong beats your chest, as you kiss them in the rain.
In the rain, in the rain, things are made and destroyed,
In the wet, in the wet, stands a person no longer broken.
I know that was a crappy poem, but think of it more as a free bump for me
Face the facts, the rain falls quickly,
Trace your tracks, and run through the dampened streets.
Try your best, find someone broken,
Strong beats your chest, as you kiss them in the rain.
In the rain, in the rain, things are made and destroyed,
In the wet, in the wet, stands a person no longer broken.
I know that was a crappy poem, but think of it more as a free bump for me
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RE: <3 :) Poems By UnknownFace :( </3
by emogiantsquid on 10-23-2009 4:24 pm
D'aw! I really like your poetry! =o
I love Rain falls quickly. The Killing was for srs so true, inspiring, ... And I really related to What Happens. =o
<3
I love Rain falls quickly. The Killing was for srs so true, inspiring, ... And I really related to What Happens. =o
<3
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by UnknownFace on 11-09-2009 12:03 am
Wow i'm amazed by all the positive feedback 
Thanks everyone!
New Haiku!!!
Birds fly quickly,
While I stay stuck to the floor,
Teach me how to fly.
Thanks everyone!
New Haiku!!!
Birds fly quickly,
While I stay stuck to the floor,
Teach me how to fly.
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RE: <3 :) Poems By UnknownFace :( </3
by Sheridan on 11-18-2009 6:15 pm
Hey, your really good! Jeeze, I feel sorta almost envious. Haha. Give me some of your talent!! 
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RE: <3 :) Poems By UnknownFace :( </3
by UnknownFace on 12-12-2009 12:18 am
Im out of ideas... Anyone have any?
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RE: <3 :) Poems By UnknownFace :( </3
by UnknownFace on 01-21-2010 11:12 pm
New haiku
Oh you - full of hate,
Like the fierce howling winds,
Try loving sometime
Testing limericks
There once was a girl named Nettle,
Who listened too rock and metal,
But she turned it to loud,
And 'poof' in a cloud,
Her ears did fall off like petals.
I'm working on a song, I'll submit it soon
Oh you - full of hate,
Like the fierce howling winds,
Try loving sometime
Testing limericks
There once was a girl named Nettle,
Who listened too rock and metal,
But she turned it to loud,
And 'poof' in a cloud,
Her ears did fall off like petals.
I'm working on a song, I'll submit it soon
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by UnknownFace on 02-06-2010 9:35 pm
Cool song i made, I don't like the chorus much... Verse chords are G, Bm, C, D if that helps anyone figure out the melody... not like anyone would want to do that anyways
Don’t Wake Up
Carry me dear, and I’ll carry you,
Down to the ocean, with sea shells and waves crashin’,
Sit on the pier, ‘til the sun goes away,
Then be a director, pretend I’m the actor,
We’ll sing to each other, songs about truth,
Or songs about nothing, or talk of stars falling,
Try something new, or an old favourite passion,
Then run a the paths, in each new direction - Into the night...
Let’s not care... Let’s go anywhere,
Life’s not fair... But I, don’t, care...
Don’t wake up.
In the morning, when we ‘fall awake,’
We’ll greet the new day, with our nightmares away,
Now laugh about something, we can’t recall,
Then eat cake for breakfast, say it starts our day fast,
And die over pictures, of old me and you,
Or live for the flavours, of every new favour,
Then we’ll go outside, and find something to do,
Maybe skip along happy, to this world so melancholy – Into the day...
Let’s not care... Let’s go anywhere,
Life’s not fair... But I, don’t, care... I, don’t, care...
Don’t wake up.
Carry me dear, and I’ll carry you,
Down to the ocean, with sea shells and waves crashin’ down...
crashin’ down...
crashin’ down...
crashin’ down...
Now don’t... wake.... up.
Let’s not care... Let’s go anywhere,
Life’s not fair... But I, don’t, care...
Yeah, Let’s not care... Let’s go anywhere,
Life’s not fair... But I, don’t, care...
Don’t wake up...
Don’t wake up...
Don’t wake up!
‘Cause I guess, this is only just a dream.
Don’t Wake Up
Carry me dear, and I’ll carry you,
Down to the ocean, with sea shells and waves crashin’,
Sit on the pier, ‘til the sun goes away,
Then be a director, pretend I’m the actor,
We’ll sing to each other, songs about truth,
Or songs about nothing, or talk of stars falling,
Try something new, or an old favourite passion,
Then run a the paths, in each new direction - Into the night...
Let’s not care... Let’s go anywhere,
Life’s not fair... But I, don’t, care...
Don’t wake up.
In the morning, when we ‘fall awake,’
We’ll greet the new day, with our nightmares away,
Now laugh about something, we can’t recall,
Then eat cake for breakfast, say it starts our day fast,
And die over pictures, of old me and you,
Or live for the flavours, of every new favour,
Then we’ll go outside, and find something to do,
Maybe skip along happy, to this world so melancholy – Into the day...
Let’s not care... Let’s go anywhere,
Life’s not fair... But I, don’t, care... I, don’t, care...
Don’t wake up.
Carry me dear, and I’ll carry you,
Down to the ocean, with sea shells and waves crashin’ down...
crashin’ down...
crashin’ down...
crashin’ down...
Now don’t... wake.... up.
Let’s not care... Let’s go anywhere,
Life’s not fair... But I, don’t, care...
Yeah, Let’s not care... Let’s go anywhere,
Life’s not fair... But I, don’t, care...
Don’t wake up...
Don’t wake up...
Don’t wake up!
‘Cause I guess, this is only just a dream.
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