giant squid.: poetry

giant squid.: poetry

by emogiantsquid on 10-22-2009 9:59 pm

Hey! Thanks so much for checking out my poetry thread, haha. =3 The below is a paragraph you can skip unless you care about the details of my poetry in general.

Mmh. I write poetry a lot. It's like my life. ... Most of my poetry falls into the Love genre. I've written for lots of other genres and just started writing a lot of Family stuffs. I don't write much about suicide, and I don't write 'feeling sorry' poems, but most of my poems are angsty, or at least not happy, but then some are happy. =| And I use rhyme sometimes, but most of my stuff is free verse and all of that. 8] And I've talked enough; I'll just show you, now.


(This one's from over half a year ago, but it still feels new to me...)

Everything Us

At the end of every day
I strap my heart to a stretcher,
Fix myself up for the next
Day. And
Every morning I forget myself
And all the world except
I wish you loved me
The same way as
My heart,
It breaks for you

Thump. Thump.. thump... dump.

In every day I live only
For you and that
In some day you may
Live for me and want
For me to be the same
Way I want you to be.

In every way I want the best
For everything
That's you and "you and I,"
For everything you to
Want everything me
To be some kind of us.

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RE: giant squid.: poetry

by emogiantsquid on 10-23-2009 4:32 pm

everything before it starts

and this is how it always starts.

after noticing without really noticing,
you were that diagonal somehow right next to me.

every cute word I can think of!
you're my new favorite color.

shadows are such good contrast
to your look of innocence;
my artist's eye doesn't know where to begin.

you take the same step over and over,
because I'm just stuck on the image of you.
you would be,
I imagine, the happy tune making me smile,
but you've so much more meaning;
I hear the piano starting,
a full symphony following,
with the metal in the shadows
(you're the brightness
I always fear will burn out
in this world, but worrying
never protected anyone).
you're smooth,
the focal point of my whole made-up world.

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RE: giant squid.: poetry

by MelodyOfMalice on 10-23-2009 4:55 pm

Wait, what?

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RE: giant squid.: poetry

by emogiantsquid on 10-23-2009 4:59 pm

Okay. Am I supposed to explain something now, because I don't know what you're asking. DX!

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RE: giant squid.: poetry

by emogiantsquid on 10-23-2009 4:59 pm

Okay. Am I supposed to explain something now, because I don't know what you're asking? DX!

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RE: giant squid.: poetry

by MelodyOfMalice on 10-23-2009 5:01 pm

Meh, don't even bother

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by emogiantsquid on 10-23-2009 5:05 pm

Right. Well, I was just confused. ...

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