my poem by cicely scerri (the first poem i have written)

the words you say
you dont know what they mean
i'll put them off til another day
you arn't me you dont know what i've seen
you didn't kow there was a price to pay
my lifes never perfect or a dream...
its a silent nightmare i cant wake from.

Advertisement

i wrote three words for you
all of them are true
their the only thing i can do
they are stuck in my head like glue
but none of them are new
these words are i love you

take my life
you don't understand this
you don't know how much i'll miss your kiss
i don't know how this could happen again
now my head is filled with pain
you didn't know when i think of you i shake
my hear was yours to break
now mine is the best life to take

a lonley track
i need you
everything i do makes me miss you
you don't know how much i wanna kiss you
i'm so sorry i hurt you it makes me sad
now everytime i think of you it hurts so bad
now my heart is broken
but the words have been spoken
you can't take them back
you left me on this lonley track

the emotion of pain
i put a razor to my wrist
emotion was something i missed
so i created pain
and i really think im going insane
now the only thing that makes me better is my blood
my tears drown me in a flood
my parents don't notice or care
i know my life will never be fair
i have to hide my eyes
because behind them my heart slowly dies

dont judge
all these beautiful people
they all think they are going places
no one understands the people that hide in the shadows
the people that fit in as much as a black rose
they sit and take abuse
and people watch and laugh as their minds come loose
these people don't ask or want attention
they don't scream or mention
the pain that they feel
and they have scars that will never heal
they take it until they disapear
only then will the people that care apear

depression
people ask whats wrong
but the care is eventually gone
they don't notice the pain stays
and it doesn't end for days
the tears fall without a sound
as the blood hits the ground

those are pretty good. i love you</3 seems a little forced, though and some of it doesnt seem to quite fit right. i really like the emotion of pain, how terrible is it that i can relate to that? but anyways, youre doing pretty good. keep writing ^^

thanks yeah i love you was pritty crappy

Very powerful poems

everything has gone cold
i fear i may not grow old
every day causes pain
i wonder what i have left to gain
i want the suffering to end
and that i have lost my last friend
i should stop waiting
my heart was once strong but now its deflating
so i should say goodbye now
the curtians closed and this goodbye is the bow

Powerful? What? These are something a 10 year old could do

well i am 14 so only 4 years off

nicw good job i realy

liked put a razor to my wrist
emotion was something i missed
so i created pain
and i really think im going insane
now the only thing that makes me better is my blood
my tears drown me in a flood
my parents don't notice or care
i know my life will never be fair
i have to hide my eyes
because behind them my heart slowly die

and the dont judge..

i can relate to them goodjob keep writing you got some talent..

i don't care anymore
you don't love me like before
i feel so alone
please don't call me i won't pick up the phone
my heart won't fix again
i need to hide the pain
i'll say im fine
i won't even show a sign
that im dying inside
i really tried
i didn't realise the pain implied