Hey! thanks for coming and reading some of my poems,
I'll start with this one
The Killing
Distinguish what is right from what is wrong.
If war is honour then honour is death, and murder, don’t name the rest.
For if you fight for truth you fight for gore, so stop the fighting, just no more!
Whether it be a rainy night or sunny day, still bullets fly every which way.
So as soon as you’ve hit the lowest low, take a second, a minute, an hour or so,
To wake up and see fate, cannot be all blood, guts, and hate.
Change for the better, not for the worse.
Fight for life, living, and freedom, whilst not forgetting the sick and impaired.
Bow down to no one who doesn’t care, kneel not for truth or dare.
Take what’s given by chance or luck, but do not be hounded by greed.
Make what is meant to be made, break what is meant to be broken,
Just have the heart to take life’s token.
Don’t get stuck in the past, keep moving forward.
Be the hero, be the saviour! Fight the war by creating a war of your own.
A war against crime, war against our pain, a war for freedom!
All of this can be done by you, me and anyone who has the courage to step forward.
It can be done, it will be done, but until it is done,
The killing will continue...
(^I wrote this one a few years back ^)
This next one I wrote at 2oclock at night, and is a half story half poem.
What Happens
Douse the pain with reassurance, I know you're there for me, but what of the others? What happens when a insecure, weird, boy walks into a place full of pressure and hate, when that boy can't live with the world as it is, and only wants to see the silver lining, and after the heart breaks, and the soul with it, as the fire that was once in his eyes is smothered by what everyone wants him to be, and leaves the cold slime of words, material, and pain, awaiting nothing... Why can't everyone care?
Stress
A young forehead with creases and wrinkles, the likes of witch you should only see on a ageing man. Most don't notice what he hides, most don't see past a charming persona. But as the day moves on, his scenes drown' and gone, his will seem to matter not, no play and too much though. He moves on while most don't notice what he hides. Do you?
Song time!
Don’t Wake Up
Carry me dear, and I’ll carry you,
Down to the ocean, with sea shells and waves crashin’,
Sit on the pier, ‘til the sun goes away,
Then be a director, pretend I’m the actor,
We’ll sing to each other, songs about truth,
Or songs about nothing, or talk of stars falling,
Try something new, or an old favourite passion,
Then run a the paths, in each new direction - Into the night...
Let’s not care... Let’s go anywhere,
Life’s not fair... But I, don’t, care...
Don’t wake up.
In the morning, when we ‘fall awake,’
We’ll greet the new day, with our nightmares away,
Now laugh about something, we can’t recall,
Then eat cake for breakfast, say it starts our day fast,
And die over pictures, of old me and you,
Or live for the flavours, of every new favour,
Then we’ll go outside, and find something to do,
Maybe skip along happy, to this world so melancholy – Into the day...
Let’s not care... Let’s go anywhere,
Life’s not fair... But I, don’t, care... I, don’t, care...
Don’t wake up.
Carry me dear, and I’ll carry you,
Down to the ocean, with sea shells and waves crashin’ down...
crashin’ down...
crashin’ down...
crashin’ down...
Now don’t... wake.... up.
Let’s not care... Let’s go anywhere,
Life’s not fair... But I, don’t, care...
Yeah, Let’s not care... Let’s go anywhere,
Life’s not fair... But I, don’t, care...
Don’t wake up...
Don’t wake up...
Don’t wake up!
‘Cause I guess, this is only just a dream.
<3 :) Poems By UnknownFace :( </3
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UnknownFace - Scene Kid
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Here's a new one.
Untitled
What would life turn to be,
If all I did was eat a tree,
Not a lifeguard, a farmer, or sailor,
What would life be, as a caterpillar.
It might be so easy,
If leaves were what pleased me,
No hassle, worry, or stress
No need to wear, my face a mess.
Then wrap myself in a cocoon so tight,
And change myself, not all in sight,
But in soul, with out a hint of cruelty,
What a beautiful way, to hit puberty.
Fitting in
It's complicated really,
No on the surface, but within,
My heart is screaming shrilly,
Why can't we all, just fit in.
Some people just don't see,
The pain they make inside,
Intention or not it can so be,
A cause of suicide.
Fit yourself,
Fit others,
Just respect,
That hurting others,
Will come back and hurt you.
Here's one I wrote in math class
The Wolf's Cry
Far echoes the lone wolf's howl,
A cry laced with sorrow,
A cry that strikes back the winds fierce growl,
This wolf he calls for tomorrow.
Strong in heart but week in soul,
The cry it's heard by all,
The cry it's passed, it's forum full,
A lady wold strides tall.
Lady wold come and track him down,
He needs you to guide him to shore,
Lady wold come and turn his frown,
So the wolves are long no more.
Another Week
Sunday night, I meet you, something new I see,
Monday night, I great you, and fall in love again.
Tuesday night, I need you, I ask if you need me,
Wednesday night, I hold you, as you answer softly.
Thursday night, I scold you, we start to drift free
Friday night, I hate you, and you hate me back,
Saturday night, I miss you, let's start at Sunday again.
Rain Falls Quickly
Face the facts, the rain falls quickly,
Trace your tracks, and run through the dampened streets.
Try your best, find someone broken,
Strong beats your chest, as you kiss them in the rain.
In the rain, in the rain, things are made and destroyed,
In the wet, in the wet, stands a person no longer broken.
I know that was a crappy poem...
A Little Too Loud
There once was a girl named Nettle,
Who listened to rock and metal,
But she turned it too loud,
And 'poof' in a cloud,
Her ears did fall off like petals.
Untitled
What would life turn to be,
If all I did was eat a tree,
Not a lifeguard, a farmer, or sailor,
What would life be, as a caterpillar.
It might be so easy,
If leaves were what pleased me,
No hassle, worry, or stress
No need to wear, my face a mess.
Then wrap myself in a cocoon so tight,
And change myself, not all in sight,
But in soul, with out a hint of cruelty,
What a beautiful way, to hit puberty.
Fitting in
It's complicated really,
No on the surface, but within,
My heart is screaming shrilly,
Why can't we all, just fit in.
Some people just don't see,
The pain they make inside,
Intention or not it can so be,
A cause of suicide.
Fit yourself,
Fit others,
Just respect,
That hurting others,
Will come back and hurt you.
Here's one I wrote in math class
The Wolf's Cry
Far echoes the lone wolf's howl,
A cry laced with sorrow,
A cry that strikes back the winds fierce growl,
This wolf he calls for tomorrow.
Strong in heart but week in soul,
The cry it's heard by all,
The cry it's passed, it's forum full,
A lady wold strides tall.
Lady wold come and track him down,
He needs you to guide him to shore,
Lady wold come and turn his frown,
So the wolves are long no more.
Another Week
Sunday night, I meet you, something new I see,
Monday night, I great you, and fall in love again.
Tuesday night, I need you, I ask if you need me,
Wednesday night, I hold you, as you answer softly.
Thursday night, I scold you, we start to drift free
Friday night, I hate you, and you hate me back,
Saturday night, I miss you, let's start at Sunday again.
Rain Falls Quickly
Face the facts, the rain falls quickly,
Trace your tracks, and run through the dampened streets.
Try your best, find someone broken,
Strong beats your chest, as you kiss them in the rain.
In the rain, in the rain, things are made and destroyed,
In the wet, in the wet, stands a person no longer broken.
I know that was a crappy poem...
A Little Too Loud
There once was a girl named Nettle,
Who listened to rock and metal,
But she turned it too loud,
And 'poof' in a cloud,
Her ears did fall off like petals.
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UnknownFace - Scene Kid
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Haiku's!
Swishing like a bird,
Words race faster than light rays,
But time moves slowly.
A Puzzle unsolved,
Is a challenge to be had,
Teach me like a cub.
If when the truth hurts,
If it’s cutting the earth open,
Would a lie hurt more.
Birds may fly quickly,
While I stay stuck to the floor,
Teach me how to fly.
Oh you - full of hate
Like the fierce howling wind,
Try loving sometime.
Smile, Smile, Smile away,
Make that frown a happy face,
Blue skies for always.
Swishing like a bird,
Words race faster than light rays,
But time moves slowly.
A Puzzle unsolved,
Is a challenge to be had,
Teach me like a cub.
If when the truth hurts,
If it’s cutting the earth open,
Would a lie hurt more.
Birds may fly quickly,
While I stay stuck to the floor,
Teach me how to fly.
Oh you - full of hate
Like the fierce howling wind,
Try loving sometime.
Smile, Smile, Smile away,
Make that frown a happy face,
Blue skies for always.
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UnknownFace - Scene Kid
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RE: <3 :) Poems By UnknownFace :( </3
KUDOS!!!!!! Loved all of them <333
+1 for sure!
*hugs*
+1 for sure!
*hugs*
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UnknownFace - Scene Kid
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Stress
A young forehead with creases and wrinkles, the likes of witch you should only see on a ageing man. Most don't notice what he hides, most don't see past a charming persona. But as the day moves on, his scenes drown' and gone, his will seem to matter not, no play and too much though. He moves on while most don't notice what he hides. Do you?
A young forehead with creases and wrinkles, the likes of witch you should only see on a ageing man. Most don't notice what he hides, most don't see past a charming persona. But as the day moves on, his scenes drown' and gone, his will seem to matter not, no play and too much though. He moves on while most don't notice what he hides. Do you?
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UnknownFace - Scene Kid
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Prepare for what is bound to happen, ignoring what can't be changed won't help anything.
Prepare for what has happened, pain won't go away unless you accept it.
Prepare for what is happening, if you can't handle yourself you can't handle the world.
Once prepared, live your life.
Prepare for what has happened, pain won't go away unless you accept it.
Prepare for what is happening, if you can't handle yourself you can't handle the world.
Once prepared, live your life.
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I love all your stuff, it's REALLY good. I could never write anything like that! Bravo! Your a definite hit in my book (:!!!
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Fitting in
It's complicated really,
No on the surface, but within,
My heart is screaming shrilly,
Why can't we all, just fit in.
Some people just don't see,
The pain they make inside,
Intention or not it can so be,
A cause of suicide.
Fit yourself,
Fit others,
Just respect,
That hurting others,
Will come back and hurt you.
It's complicated really,
No on the surface, but within,
My heart is screaming shrilly,
Why can't we all, just fit in.
Some people just don't see,
The pain they make inside,
Intention or not it can so be,
A cause of suicide.
Fit yourself,
Fit others,
Just respect,
That hurting others,
Will come back and hurt you.
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UnknownFace - Scene Kid
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awww. i think i love you =]
I am a potato poems make me cry. in a good way!
keep it up dude. you're amazing.
I am a potato poems make me cry. in a good way!
keep it up dude. you're amazing.
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