I wish I could freeze this moment
My mouth against your lips
If I could relive this day
When you and I first kissed
Your lips are so warm
So soft against mine
We hide from everybody
Even though it isnt a crime
Our hands interlock
Our fingers fit in perfectly
Like my favourite jigsaw puzzle
Yet nobody cares to see
No one understands our love
When together we are seen
They're jealous cause they've never felt
The same way as you and me
~~~ ANDREW ELLIOTT ~~~
i love you Abbey
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First Kiss (3)
by fearless on 07-04-2009 7:44 am
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by Broken Symphony on 07-04-2009 9:49 pm
awww
This is such sweet poem
I love it. You are definatly one of my favourite poets on here
This is such sweet poem
I love it. You are definatly one of my favourite poets on here
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by fearless on 07-04-2009 11:43 pm
Thanks heaps. This is the first of few poems I could write that were happy ones. They're harder to write than the bloodthirsty, emo ones. 
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