Depths of hell

My anger riples through
more and more.
i want to slit your throat
but i know i will regret it in the morning.

you leave me be
and i grab my blade.
i press it to my skin
and start to cry.

Why did you never llisten to me?
i feel as if i failed.
i press it harder
to my skin.

My world belongs in hell
I have tried to show you
who was boss,
you don't belong in my life.

My anger riples through
more and more.
i want to slit your throat
but i know i will regret it in the morning.

I haven't payed attention
to what my actions where
while the blade pushes harder,
my blood floods over.

I cry more
at the thought
of what will happen.
was i right?

i pass out
and i wake
in the depthes of hell
hearing screams.

I join along with,
i realize,
i am away from you
and the rest of my family!

I'm dead,
living in the depths of hell.
its not as bad as you think
its actually quit peacefull.

living
in
the depths of hell.

(I don't care if i have bad speeling and punctuation!!! Why do you think i failed language?!!!)

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Grammar check & punctuation, plz.