Poem Name??? Help

Poem Name??? Help

by XxLauren29xX on 06-13-2009 5:08 pm

The last spects of light peeking though,
Now disappear as the sun starts to set.
Walking in the moonlight with the rose of death,
Dragging it on the other trees around.

The moon is covered of what you think is clouds,
But it is only just the fog of your memory of it,
Walking peacefully with no sleep,
Going back, and the light peeks through again.

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by loserbae on 06-24-2009 9:11 pm

i cant help give it a name but i love it!!!

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by XxLauren29xX on 06-25-2009 8:12 am

loserbae wrote: i cant help give it a name but i love it!!!
thankyou!!^_^

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by dysfunctionalreality on 06-27-2009 1:53 am

Wow; thats really good, idont know whatyou should call it, it will come to you eventually though , "The last spects of light peeking though,
Now disappear as the sun starts to set." kinda reminds me of dusk, then the end; dawn, so i have no clue. sorry

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by XxLauren29xX on 06-29-2009 8:06 am

dysfunctionalreality wrote: Wow; thats really good, idont know whatyou should call it, it will come to you eventually though , "The last spects of light peeking though,
Now disappear as the sun starts to set." kinda reminds me of dusk, then the end; dawn, so i have no clue. sorry
Lol, thanks anways ^_^!!!!!!!!!

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RE: Poem Name??? Help

by KittensKill on 06-29-2009 8:35 am

why do poems need names?
most of mine are simply "untitled"

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Re: RE: Poem Name??? Help

by emocite on 07-03-2009 9:38 am

KittensKill wrote: why do poems need names?
most of mine are simply "untitled"


In that way I use "No name poem..." Smile

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