Poem Name??? Help

The last spects of light peeking though,
Now disappear as the sun starts to set.
Walking in the moonlight with the rose of death,
Dragging it on the other trees around.

The moon is covered of what you think is clouds,
But it is only just the fog of your memory of it,
Walking peacefully with no sleep,
Going back, and the light peeks through again.

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i cant help give it a name but i love it!!!

loserbae wrote: i cant help give it a name but i love it!!!

thankyou!!^_^

Wow; thats really good, idont know whatyou should call it, it will come to you eventually though , "The last spects of light peeking though,
Now disappear as the sun starts to set." kinda reminds me of dusk, then the end; dawn, so i have no clue. sorry

dysfunctionalreality wrote: Wow; thats really good, idont know whatyou should call it, it will come to you eventually though , "The last spects of light peeking though,
Now disappear as the sun starts to set." kinda reminds me of dusk, then the end; dawn, so i have no clue. sorry

Lol, thanks anways ^_^!!!!!!!!!

why do poems need names?
most of mine are simply "untitled"

KittensKill wrote: why do poems need names?
most of mine are simply "untitled"

In that way I use "No name poem..."