True Angel

I wrote these lyrics to a song for my girlfriend and for her birthday I will sing it for her! She has never read them yet and I want to know if I need to improve on anything. and yes I know its repetitive....

True Angel

I know that,
that this wont last,
But I hope
You will never forget.
Even in the darkest of nights
I know that,
Yes I know
Your always be standing right there.
You're my one true angel
And I wrote this song for you


You are my one life, my one, my true happiness
You are my stars, my world
My heaven shining down
Upon this tainted soul
That you've saved over again.


Even the cold of the winter nights
I will be there
Even when the distance comes between us
Know, I'll be there.
There is no ending
There is nothing to stop me from now reaching you
I will promise you.


You are my one life, my one, my true happiness
You are my stars, my world
My heaven shining down
Upon this tainted soul
That you've saved over again.


You are my one life, my one, my true happiness
You are my stars, my world
My heaven shining down
Upon this tainted soul
That you've saved over again.


And I know,
that this wont last,
But I hope
You will never forget.
Even in the darkest of nights
I know that,
You never will forget.


Even the cold of the winter night
I will be there
Even when the distance come between us
Know I'll be there.
There is no ending
There is nothing to stop me from now reaching you
I will promise you.


You are my one life, my one, my true happiness
You are my stars, my world
My heaven shining down
Upon this tainted soul
That you've saved over again.

And I know that this wont last
You are my beautiful Angel.
You are my love
And I think
I can't think to live without you.

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wow this is awesome.
love it
hope ur gf does too!!!

Thank you very much. I know where is a lot of room for improvement since this is my first time actually writing lyrics.