A poem I wrote ages ago about my dad.
Ring around a rosy
A game I used to play
And now that I look back
I miss my childhood days
A pocket full of poseys
Life was simple life was fun
But these horemones
Make me feel undone
A tissue a tissue
I never wanted to grow
Cus I was a kid and i had you
I never felt any sorrow
We all fall down
I miss you every day
I'll forever be your princess
I miss the days of play
Ring Around A Rosy
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Ring Around A Rosy
by casperONFIRE on 05-12-2008 5:50 am
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RE: Ring Around A Rosy
by Jamekae on 11-23-2008 2:26 am
I really like the concept of it, it's a real special piece of work. Though, if I remember, the song revolved around the bubonic plague, since I know this I find it hard to relate childhood with such death and destruction.
Minus that element however and focusing on the children's development, yes, it's amazing. Good job.
Minus that element however and focusing on the children's development, yes, it's amazing. Good job.
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by casperONFIRE on 11-23-2008 4:08 am
I used ring around a rosy because it used to be my dads song, and plus it was related to death and the plague and he died of a horrid disease(though not a plague).
And yeah I posted this ages ago, reading over it I relise how shitty it is.
And yeah I posted this ages ago, reading over it I relise how shitty it is.
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RE: Ring Around A Rosy
by lostgirl on 11-24-2008 11:05 pm
how that was sooo good! loved it so much. and it not shitty. it awesome!!!! keep writing
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by fearless on 07-08-2009 2:59 am
hey
this is sweet, and has a good meaning.
I love the way you use each line and expand on it. its clever, and not the first thing most people think of. its got heaps of emotion in it. probably a sad story behind it, but you've done a good job.
You have talent. keep it up
all the best. andrew
this is sweet, and has a good meaning.
I love the way you use each line and expand on it. its clever, and not the first thing most people think of. its got heaps of emotion in it. probably a sad story behind it, but you've done a good job.
You have talent. keep it up
all the best. andrew
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