For someone who is now gone

For someone who is now gone

by 6xXxEmoLuvxXx9 on 09-25-2008 4:29 pm

Cold in despair
I look at your corpse and only stare
Why must life be so unfair
Why must it end so abruptly

To think the fragile flesh and cold eyes used to hold life
that was used to mold the fragile heart of the hurt
Now your shell will lay 6 feet in dirt

Where did the warmth go?
why must the heart beat so few?
To give up love, and to see the darkness which now is your heart
Living in a cold dormant state
Fate never seemed so fake

Why did you lie and say you would be there when i need you
and when i look back, you died?
My heart withered
like the rose above your tomb
and this simple pulse of doom that i cannot escape

They drape you in colors
and all i see is grey
looking afar from the bay
i see a light, so faint that light seems more like hate

Looking in the darkest glass
I see nothing only black
do not forget me, my dearest
For soon night will never last

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RE: For someone who is now gone

by PunkRockAngel4Life on 09-25-2008 8:49 pm

Omg I love it!
...It made me cry
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by Lillith on 09-26-2008 5:59 pm

you do some good work. do you have any more on here? i would love to read them if you do. if not hope to see more of your work soon.
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by infinitesilence on 09-27-2008 1:55 pm

Wow, I absolutely love it.
It's really sad.
I like how detailed and intense you are.
I'm sorry I met you darling,
I'm sorry I met you.
As she turned into the night, all he had were the words,
I'm sorry I met you darling,
I'm sorry I left you.

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by rockitemokid on 09-27-2008 2:34 pm

I liked it Smile
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by 6xXxEmoLuvxXx9 on 09-28-2008 6:45 am

Lillith wrote: you do some good work. do you have any more on here? i would love to read them if you do. if not hope to see more of your work soon.


I do, but its not my best works, Its called You dont own me lolz

and t hanks for the comments, hope to get more ^.^

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