THER IS NO DARKNIS all around me is light
there are no shadows i want to get in a fight
im like so abused
not confused i just got out of the shower now i cant wait till this hour
passes as i fall asleep my hands ajar everywhere but where i can show them
ive got so much luck i jujst cant seem to find it
im all up in the light i cant see myself its too bright
thank my self for the top of the line creative sht i just devoured
dang when will it feel like ive just given myself more power
caause after that drop i feel all weeak insidee
my insides drift to sleep i cried
so much to tak e the numb nothing away im so scared somehting willhappen
to take my life the tomarro whatever ive wished for and thot of getting away.
then comes the darkness i wake up im so unhappy
its over the lightt ceases and my sickness gets all aspargusy
like somehting u know wa t it is buts gross wont go near it
im like a bad disease got so much songs on the internet ddownloaded before to push it
as somehting i want to be somehting to power me up
but instead i get this dread an feel like al im ding is copying it up
too much to complain they think i like it
ims scared and scratching as i fear in my room wats hatching
normail things they unfold on me to make it seem like its ok
to feel this way but the n throw it at me im insane
im not insane i just love to lose it all and gain it back i s a lie,
i never wanted it i always wanted the other thing
im not insane wat will become of these emotions by halloween?
poems by emopoops AKA EMO QUEEN
poems by emopoops AKA EMO QUEEN
by emopoops on 09-21-2008 9:15 pm
u frikken fakes.
im the scene queen u should listen to me. shh no speak, FKn
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by RestriCKted on 09-21-2008 9:31 pm
Try typing in a font thats not so small that only the Asians can read it..
Birds of a feather; screw the middle class all together.
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Rules are like bones, they were meant to be broken.
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by emopoops on 09-21-2008 9:47 pm
try using zoom if u care so much as to respond
u frikken fakes.
im the scene queen u should listen to me. shh no speak, FKn
im the scene queen u should listen to me. shh no speak, FKn-
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RE: poems by emopoops AKA EMO QUEEN
by MetalSuicide on 09-22-2008 1:31 am
Hahaha 'Emo Queen'
But seriously
Fix your grammar before you post a poem
And dont type so small
It's just annoying
But seriously
Fix your grammar before you post a poem
And dont type so small
It's just annoying
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by shadowslight on 09-22-2008 1:51 pm
I'm usually open minded when it comes to reading a poem, but I agree with restrickted, the font is too small, sorry
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RE: poems by emopoops AKA EMO QUEEN
by smeffi101 on 09-22-2008 2:08 pm
hey dont be so harsh!!
i like your poem but you do need to type larger so that we can read it easier and tiding up grammer wont hurt
but its good basis good luck x
i like your poem but you do need to type larger so that we can read it easier and tiding up grammer wont hurt
but its good basis good luck x
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life is our hell.
life is our hell.
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by RestriCKted on 09-22-2008 5:01 pm
try using zoom if u care so much as to respond
If you're not going to type big enough for it to be read, then I dont give a fuck about reading it.
"Emo Queen"..Poser queen, or drama queen would fit better.
You seem to be a bitch, based off lots of your forum posts.
Birds of a feather; screw the middle class all together.
Rules are like bones, they were meant to be broken.
Rules are like bones, they were meant to be broken.
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by emopoops on 09-22-2008 8:36 pm
RestriCKted wrote:try using zoom if u care so much as to respond
If you're not going to type big enough for it to be read, then I dont give a fuck about reading it.
"Emo Queen"..Poser queen, or drama queen would fit better.
You seem to be a bitch, based off lots of your forum posts.
maybe a good title 4 u
but anyways here is another one of my poems considering the FACT that i weight 55 pounds exactly i am going to give a tribute to my sexy anorexic body and type in smallest fonts i can thank u very much its very much readable and they ARE my poems. maybe you should get anew computer or some glasses before u start to hate on my AND MY WORK.
this one is called damaged scene X
the whole ammount of pain iv ebeen through after th night you left me alone to cry my eyes out wherever u left me
i startd to typ a bit about this on the computer to my old livejournals and
i decided its not woorth it to me to get all up in my own sht becaus im lyks so totally scene.
the hole i pikd in my face thet night i startd then it creatd a whol lot of more drama fro me n it wasnt because i was to misfortunate to hav to creta big bloody mess for u to see
down with my pain i lost control of myself got in to the ca with someone i ccouldnt know drove me far
cant believ was happened that night alone without u becauseu dumped me because well, "we fight."
the poems the mindsets arn for u but contain ur unhelpfulness on a trip into the sewer of my mind because of all the drugs and relationships u thot i would like myself to be bound, to call them mine
as if i wantd all of those unstoppable sickly things as my own
i yet havent decided wat im going to do about you cuz im still alone.
dearest x i think u havent seen the worrst of it yet
something i cant explain via anythingbut spoken word
i thot i could help me i thot u could too.
the onleee time we spent togethrs now coming back closr to my mind i, u so rude i found someting that cured.
disasterous decisions i never made for my own bein
quiality time i nevr spent with myself
it was u who i asked it was u that i supplied my faith in through the
sickly after death feelings i needed help.
gone with the wind like a childhood class assignment
iam thrown away as u listen to music we all know reminds you of wat you think u need to keep doing to me
throughaway your memories throw them all away.
im really ok i really was ok **************************** i really was ok it didnt really matter if i was okay to you
it really doesnt matter you never understood the meaning of stay.
u frikken fakes.
im the scene queen u should listen to me. shh no speak, FKn
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by ZRC on 09-22-2008 8:38 pm
XD what? you're being arrogant about your "anorexic body"? Also, text is too small. You are not worthy of my critique.
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by RestriCKted on 09-22-2008 8:42 pm
Hey, the raid is next friday..Today is Monday..
Birds of a feather; screw the middle class all together.
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Rules are like bones, they were meant to be broken.
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RE: poems by emopoops AKA EMO QUEEN
by darkened star on 09-22-2008 8:49 pm
Ok here's the thing, you need to take constructive criticism without bitching about it.
Otherwise, keep the thoughts to yourself because no one wants to hear it.
And by the way using this text size to write poems is just dumb.
Otherwise, keep the thoughts to yourself because no one wants to hear it.
And by the way using this text size to write poems is just dumb.
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by soldierofsorrows on 09-22-2008 11:26 pm
EMO!
I'm too lazy to press the zoom button so I won't bother.
I'm too lazy to press the zoom button so I won't bother.
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by emopoops on 09-23-2008 12:38 am
IM NOT BITCHING this is a thread created by me with my poems in it you are bitching about my sht. so take your won advise homes. not a troll btw i have no idea wat your referring to with the raid posts homie.
u frikken fakes.
im the scene queen u should listen to me. shh no speak, FKn
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