Rayven's Poems

*just a note.....I will be posting some in french and possibly their translations later on (the translations themselves will be in Dark red beneath it when I do post them)*

Damné

La mine d'Enfer est passionnante
La lumière éternelle de mal s'éclaircit
Les ténèbres se réveillent dans la nuit
Les subalternes de Lucifer crawlent

La lumière du soleil diminuera
Le crépuscule approche
comme la lune prend le ciel

L'obscurité s'appelle
L'atteinte pour les âmes des morts
Qui ne pleurent pour personne aidera

Les nuages bloquent les étoiles
La lune se cache dans leur voile
Une chandelle solitaire s'assoit sur le rebord de fenêtre
Offre de peu de lumière

Brûlez! Brûlez pendant que vous pouvez peu de chandelle
Pour lo'!
Les Portes d'Enfer se sont ouvertes!


Cursed

The pit of Hell is stirring
The eternal light of evil brightens
Shadows wake in the night
Lucifer's minions are crawling

Light of the sun will wane
Dusk draws near
as the moon takes the sky

The darkness is calling
Reaching for the souls of the dead
Who weep for no one will help

Clouds block the stars
The moon hides within their veil
A lone candle sits on the windowsill
Offering little light

Burn! Burn while you can little candle
For lo'!
The Gates of Hell have opened!

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This is more of a song, but oh well, still counts to me:

Wings (of a Fallen Angel)

A stormy night in the countryside
And she’s all alone
Staring up through the leaves
Of the old oak tree
-
Lonely thoughts cross her mind
As the rain pours down
And she wished to fly away…
-
On the wings of a fallen angel
There is no path home
Nothing but old memories
Of a tormented soul
So fly, fly away
Into the black sky
With your wings, my fallen angel
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Strong winds whip around her
Stinging her pale skin
Leave are ripped from their branches
And sent into the distance
-
But despite her pain
She remains
Wishing to fly…
-
On the wings of a fallen angel
There is no path home
Nothing but old memories
Of a tormented soul
So fly, fly away
Into the black sky
With your wings, my fallen angel
-
Lightning strikes
Crackling in the air
Striking where she once sat
Setting it ablaze
-
But yet no fear
Shows in her eyes
And she flies….
-
On the wings of a fallen angel
There is no path home
Nothing but old memories
Of a tormented soul
So fly, fly away
Into the black sky
With your wings, my fallen angel
-
Let your wings take you far…..my fallen angel

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Mon Oubli

La réputation sur le bord de temps
Le bord d'un champ sombre
Le changement arrivant dans le battement des paupières d'un oeil

Le soleil a mis
Le fait de me laisser la paix
La réputation dans cet endroit solitaire

Aucune lune pour me guider
Aucune étoile pour mes compagnons
Juste seul

Le froid est survenu
Le fait de congeler mes déchirures
Mon coeur
Mon âme

Un endroit affligé c'est
Cela dans lequel je ne peux jamais partir

Je marche ce champ
Le bord de folie

My Oblivion

Standing on the brink of time
The edge of a dark field
Change happening in the blink of an eye

The sun has set
Leaving me alone
Standing in this lonely place

No moon to guide me
No stars for my companions
Just alone

The cold has set in
Freezing my tears
My heart
My soul

A sorrowful place this is
That in which I can never leave

I walk this field
The edge of insanity

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okay, well when u post in english i will comment on them. =]

okay, well when u post in english i will comment on them. =]

I see that someone doesnt now how to read all of what someone said before making a dumbass comment.

the translations themselves will be in Dark red beneath it when I do post them

Now for the poem.
I Cant really tell what its about, but it still sounds cool.
Nice.

RestriCKted wrote:

okay, well when u post in english i will comment on them. =]

I see that someone doesnt now how to read all of what someone said before making a dumbass comment.

the translations themselves will be in Dark red beneath it when I do post them

Now for the poem.
I Cant really tell what its about, but it still sounds cool.
Nice.

Technically, I added the last bit after they posted that.....I had forgotten to and then I posted the translation so take it easy on them *pats head*

and thanks....came to me in school about a week ago

RestriCKted wrote:

okay, well when u post in english i will comment on them. =]

I see that someone doesnt now how to read all of what someone said before making a dumbass comment.

the translations themselves will be in Dark red beneath it when I do post them

Now for the poem.
I Cant really tell what its about, but it still sounds cool.
Nice.

yea, umm i wrote that b4 she posted in english, like she said.so, yea, i did read all of what she said. dumbass bitch. so ha! maybe someone should realize that they need to stop being such a big fat meany, cus its not cool.

oh, and i like this poem. although the subject is unclear to me. unless someone has just died and is about to go to hell, because they are "cursed"

xxoclicheoxx wrote:

RestriCKted wrote:

okay, well when u post in english i will comment on them. =]

I see that someone doesnt now how to read all of what someone said before making a dumbass comment.

the translations themselves will be in Dark red beneath it when I do post them

Now for the poem.
I Cant really tell what its about, but it still sounds cool.
Nice.

yea, umm i wrote that b4 she posted in english, like she said.so, yea, i did read all of what she said. dumbass bitch. so ha! maybe someone should realize that they need to stop being such a big fat meany, cus its not cool.

oh, and i like this poem. although the subject is unclear to me. unless someone has just died and is about to go to hell, because they are "cursed"

please don't yell at him...he didn't know

and I don't really know what it's about either. It just...popped into my head

Rayven wrote:

xxoclicheoxx wrote:

RestriCKted wrote:

okay, well when u post in english i will comment on them. =]

I see that someone doesnt now how to read all of what someone said before making a dumbass comment.

the translations themselves will be in Dark red beneath it when I do post them

Now for the poem.
I Cant really tell what its about, but it still sounds cool.
Nice.

yea, umm i wrote that b4 she posted in english, like she said.so, yea, i did read all of what she said. dumbass bitch. so ha! maybe someone should realize that they need to stop being such a big fat meany, cus its not cool.

oh, and i like this poem. although the subject is unclear to me. unless someone has just died and is about to go to hell, because they are "cursed"

please don't yell at him...he didn't know

and I don't really know what it's about either. It just...popped into my head

eiii..he deserved it. his ignorance....raaah lets be mean to kayla while we dont kno what were talkin about. =|

ha, what an odd thing to pop into ur head. =]

yea, umm i wrote that b4 she posted in english, like she said.so, yea, i did read all of what she said. dumbass bitch. so ha! maybe someone should realize that they need to stop being such a big fat meany, cus its not cool.

My bad. I apologize

eiii..he deserved it. his ignorance....

Nevermind, I take it back.

RestriCKted wrote:

yea, umm i wrote that b4 she posted in english, like she said.so, yea, i did read all of what she said. dumbass bitch. so ha! maybe someone should realize that they need to stop being such a big fat meany, cus its not cool.

My bad. I apologize

eiii..he deserved it. his ignorance....

Nevermind, I take it back.

well if u apologize it's cool, if not then ure still a big fat meany!

xxoclicheoxx wrote:

Rayven wrote:

xxoclicheoxx wrote:

RestriCKted wrote:

okay, well when u post in english i will comment on them. =]

I see that someone doesnt now how to read all of what someone said before making a dumbass comment.

the translations themselves will be in Dark red beneath it when I do post them

Now for the poem.
I Cant really tell what its about, but it still sounds cool.
Nice.

yea, umm i wrote that b4 she posted in english, like she said.so, yea, i did read all of what she said. dumbass bitch. so ha! maybe someone should realize that they need to stop being such a big fat meany, cus its not cool.

oh, and i like this poem. although the subject is unclear to me. unless someone has just died and is about to go to hell, because they are "cursed"

please don't yell at him...he didn't know

and I don't really know what it's about either. It just...popped into my head

eiii..he deserved it. his ignorance....raaah lets be mean to kayla while we dont kno what were talkin about. =|

ha, what an odd thing to pop into ur head. =]

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Rayven wrote:

xxoclicheoxx wrote:

Rayven wrote:

xxoclicheoxx wrote:

RestriCKted wrote:

okay, well when u post in english i will comment on them. =]

I see that someone doesnt now how to read all of what someone said before making a dumbass comment.

the translations themselves will be in Dark red beneath it when I do post them

Now for the poem.
I Cant really tell what its about, but it still sounds cool.
Nice.

yea, umm i wrote that b4 she posted in english, like she said.so, yea, i did read all of what she said. dumbass bitch. so ha! maybe someone should realize that they need to stop being such a big fat meany, cus its not cool.

oh, and i like this poem. although the subject is unclear to me. unless someone has just died and is about to go to hell, because they are "cursed"

please don't yell at him...he didn't know

and I don't really know what it's about either. It just...popped into my head

eiii..he deserved it. his ignorance....raaah lets be mean to kayla while we dont kno what were talkin about. =|

ha, what an odd thing to pop into ur head. =]

...

you dont mean that in a nasty way do you?

no......just tired of people fighting...

its all good now. =]

good, I'll have a new poem up soon