VACANCY

Falling into a black abyss
thinking I'll never get out of this
and I'm just one more forgotten myth
shadowed by your venemous kiss

Turned into one more lost word
one more last thought in your bad world
another idea said, but not heard
loved and hanged by my dark lord

Now you will hear my eerie screams
and decide not to think of what it means
It's a haunted illusion not what it seems
Hear my voice while all descends

Soon you will be screaming my name
head held low and writhe in pain
everyone will cease to be the same
before it ends I prepare my gun and aim

Now all under my reign are free
chose not to exist or to be
for the end is here for only me
and all that's left is vacancy.

[oahzzz so sahhhhhd...lolz.^_^]

It's not exactly in any sort of, poetic structure.

Also, please keep all of your "poems" in this thread.

nice poem!!!!

Its good to see people making their own poetry threads

I hope you flip.
I hope you fall.
I'm so happy,
can't you tell?
It's so ridiculous
how she fell.
Grab my throat,
and make me swallow.
Take my life,
and make me hollow.
Live by night,
and take my fears.
Live for light,
and see my tears.
Full of hurt,
and going insane.
Full to burnt,
and waiting to rain.
Hold me close,
for I have fallen.
Give me overdose,
I hear him calling...
Fear me,
and choose to die.
Fear he,
and loose the sky.
Thinking I am going crazy.
Thinking all this is gore.
Knowing I won't forget you, baby.
Knowing all of you I've bore.
Forget the holy,
Forget the taught.
Forget me slowly,
Forget me...not.

Pretty rainbows
in the sky.
Pretty birds
to help me fly.
Pull me up,
high so high.
Take my over,
over and by.
I feel you,
and your love.
I see you
above me, high above.
Load yourself
upon me.
Let yourself
beloved, me.
I'm so happy,
for you, darling.
I'm so grateful,
you have not fallen.
I need you deeply.
So please forgive me.
Let's go up, up
to the heavens.
Way up, up
to see the ravens.
Yay, we finaly
reached our point.
So together in
peace we join.

My life is just someone's
sick idea of "fun"
It's what feels like pain inside
me, but it's all just fiction
Hurt stabs at me like a
needle that's so hard to pull out.
Turns me over, flips me in,
kills and makes me want to shout.
Look at me, and describe
to me what it is you see.
Is it disgustingly gross,
or so beautiful and so pretty?
I'm going insane now
and I don't know what to do.
Should I murder, or slaughter
and be reborn in abiku?
Don't look at me like I'm stupid,
I know what it is I'm doing.
I may screw up once or twice,
but it's all the effort I'm putting.
Talk to me if it's something worthy
stop if it's something malicious.
Flatter me and compliment, alls
bullshit, you're just vicious.
My life's just not THAT good,
for a person to come talk.
That's not how it should
be, but all they do is mock.
I have no idea what so ever
if it truly really is pure jealousy,
but what you should realize is
you don't come mess with me.
Call out the freaking cops
on me, I don't really care.
I've been held responsible for
more shit than my fair share.
Call me enormously crazy,
and call me insane,
but I promise you soon,
you'll be seeing my name.

were u listening to the im an emo kid song by adam and andrew wen u came up with this one. because its fkn hilarious.

um...no n.n

i like them. they're good.(: