Reflections of a broken heart
Through a broken mirror
What could be worse than this
Where did all the time go?
Candles dance on the wall
As I sit and stare
No one seems to care
I should have just died there
Flames so pretty and bright
They light up the night
Feels like I'm runnin through them right now
I'm tryin to cool off
But you went too far
With what you said
Burnt a whole in my heart
And now I'm patching things up
Wiping the ash off of my face
Leaves marks
From your lies
It hurts so much
It brings tears to my eyes
Burnin through your web
Should never have gotten tied up
With you
But now all I have is regret
And I can't make you
Take back what you said
It's really over now
Poems By GT
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GlassTears - /Win
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RE: Broken
I thought that was amazing,
I loved it,
keep writing, please!
I loved it,
keep writing, please!
You come to me with scars on your wrist
You tell me this will be the last night feeling like this
I just came to say goodbye
I didn't want you to see me cry, I'm fine
But I know it's a lie...
You tell me this will be the last night feeling like this
I just came to say goodbye
I didn't want you to see me cry, I'm fine
But I know it's a lie...
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emogirlxo - Almost Emo
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- Age: 13
- Gender: Female
- Location: Halloween Town also known as Canada xD
Re: RE: Broken
emogirlxo wrote: I thought that was amazing,
I loved it,
keep writing, please!![]()
Thank you!
It's stranger than fiction how you've decayed
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GlassTears - /Win
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Falling
Standing in a dim lit room
I see you
I run towards you to hug you
But I fall right through you
I hit the wall again
I see the writing
And it looks like mine
It's the diary that I've carved
It talks about how many times I've seen you
And how I always end up
Falling for you every time
I see you
I run towards you to hug you
But I fall right through you
I hit the wall again
I see the writing
And it looks like mine
It's the diary that I've carved
It talks about how many times I've seen you
And how I always end up
Falling for you every time
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GlassTears - /Win
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RE: Broken
Great poem, GT
It was very, very good.
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The Rage Of ArC - Almost Emo
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- Joined: 03 Aug 2008
- Age: 17
- Gender: Male
- Location: Wexford, Ireland
RE: Broken
aw. that was really nice! Good job.
It's raining, it's pouring, he's no longer adoring. I'll lay in bed, bag on my head, and hope to die by morning.
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ilovemyemokid13 - Emo Kid
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- Joined: 27 Jun 2008
- Age: 15
- Gender: Female
- Location: standing alone with my eyes to the sun...
RE: Broken
Broken reflections, Dancing Candles .. Niice, Keep writing!
~ Life Had Taught Me To Appreciate Death ~
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Lifeless - Emo Kid
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- Gender: Female
- Location: The Horizon ^.^ where I am Untouchable!
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GlassTears - /Win
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RE: Broken
This is a very good poem,
its much better then the one i posted that you commented on
Keep it up
its much better then the one i posted that you commented on
Keep it up
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fletcher1608 - Fresh Meat
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- Gender: Male
- Location: Walsall, Birmingham
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xxneverforgetmysuicidexx - Registered
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- Joined: 03 Jul 2008
- Age: 16
- Gender: Female
- Location: Wonderland
Unwanted Answers
I get to the point
Of when I think I'm over you
But then I try to take a step ahead
And I fall
Wondering how it happened like this
Trying to smile even in the middle of this
Feels like I'm falling forever
Its been years and I still haven't found solid ground
Holding onto hopes that are shattered
Cause giving up would get me nowhere
I hear you echo through the chambers
But I can't make out the words
But deep down in my heart I know that
It's nothing but the wind howling
Through my empty and shallow heart
That I never should have trusted
I try to grab the walls for safety
But they are cold and wet
Is there any point in going on
I ask myself daily
Even though I never get a reply
I know the answer
I just haven't figured out
If it's the answer that I want
Of when I think I'm over you
But then I try to take a step ahead
And I fall
Wondering how it happened like this
Trying to smile even in the middle of this
Feels like I'm falling forever
Its been years and I still haven't found solid ground
Holding onto hopes that are shattered
Cause giving up would get me nowhere
I hear you echo through the chambers
But I can't make out the words
But deep down in my heart I know that
It's nothing but the wind howling
Through my empty and shallow heart
That I never should have trusted
I try to grab the walls for safety
But they are cold and wet
Is there any point in going on
I ask myself daily
Even though I never get a reply
I know the answer
I just haven't figured out
If it's the answer that I want
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GlassTears - /Win
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RE: Poems By xXGlassTearsXx
Sea of Broken Dreams
Somewhere off
Far from me
Sits a little girl
At the edge of the sea
Watching the waves
Just like her dreams
Beat up on the rocks
But then break apart
She watches the sun set
With an eerie glow
Just like glowing embers
Soon start to fade
Just like the love she lost
Not too long ago
Followed by the sunset
Soon comes the moon
Giving light
On the sea of broken dreams
Somewhere off
Far from me
Sits a little girl
At the edge of the sea
Watching the waves
Just like her dreams
Beat up on the rocks
But then break apart
She watches the sun set
With an eerie glow
Just like glowing embers
Soon start to fade
Just like the love she lost
Not too long ago
Followed by the sunset
Soon comes the moon
Giving light
On the sea of broken dreams
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GlassTears - /Win
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RE: Poems By xXGlassTearsXx
Dead Beauty
The air is fresh and crisp with a slight scent of flowers
The furniture is is dusted and polished
The halls are lined with memories
The picture frames are silver and golden
The pictures new and fresh
The wall paper new and clean
Years went by and the family left
Leaving everything behind
What caused them to leave
No one has been able to understand
The sun rises and shines on the house like an unwelcome enemy
The house now shows its true colors
The sun shines throught the dusty cracked windows
And spreads light across the modly decaying wood floor
The stale unmoving air makes every breath a struggle
Dust smothers the furniture
The halls that were once lined with happy memories have now faded
The frames are tarnished and black
The pictures have faded and fallen to the ground
The wall paper has peeled and uncovered the rotting wood
Everything has a certain length to live
And when that time is up
There is no bringing it back
The air is fresh and crisp with a slight scent of flowers
The furniture is is dusted and polished
The halls are lined with memories
The picture frames are silver and golden
The pictures new and fresh
The wall paper new and clean
Years went by and the family left
Leaving everything behind
What caused them to leave
No one has been able to understand
The sun rises and shines on the house like an unwelcome enemy
The house now shows its true colors
The sun shines throught the dusty cracked windows
And spreads light across the modly decaying wood floor
The stale unmoving air makes every breath a struggle
Dust smothers the furniture
The halls that were once lined with happy memories have now faded
The frames are tarnished and black
The pictures have faded and fallen to the ground
The wall paper has peeled and uncovered the rotting wood
Everything has a certain length to live
And when that time is up
There is no bringing it back
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GlassTears - /Win
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- Age: 69
- Location: Hells Welcome Center
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GlassTears - /Win
- Posts: 5732
- Joined: 23 Jul 2008
- Age: 69
- Location: Hells Welcome Center
RE: Poems By xXGlassTearsXx
BUMP
(im gonna keep doing this until someone comments)
(im gonna keep doing this until someone comments)
It's stranger than fiction how you've decayed
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GlassTears - /Win
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