I miss him so much..

I miss him so much..

by Rebecca on 11-25-2007 9:20 am

The days get darker
the shadow grows smaller
no longer are we standing outside
we sit inside staring out the window waiting for the sun to come out
we know it's not going to happen..
winter has fallen
the days grow cold and wet
the ground fills with white
but all i see is black
darkness takes over me
as i lay in the snow
i stare off into space
dreaming of you
you used to be there
you used to hold my hand
but now your gone
I'm left with nothing
i need to see you
without you, there is no point
you were my guiding light
the one that made me keep my head up high
keep me going on even if it'd be hard
what am i supposed to do without you
i really have no clue
there's no point to life
no point of giving it a second chance
let me lay and die
because without you it's just not right

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by JV009 on 11-26-2007 3:59 am

wow! i love ur poem

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by Rebecca on 12-01-2007 7:20 am

Thanks, i used hell alot of time to finish it

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by JV009 on 12-10-2007 8:56 pm

Rebecca wrote: Thanks, i used hell alot of time to finish it


ur welcom, it turned out great Very Happy

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by Amon on 12-11-2007 6:17 am

Not bad.I will give it a 7 out of a 10!Smile

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