this is one of my original poems. this is a sonnet (Shakespearean sonnet):
(for those who didn't know)
10 syllables
A
B
A
B
C
D
C
D
E
F
E
F
G
G
please give comments about it, please
here it goes:
I never thought that things would end this way,
Still confused about what's been said and done.
But what more is there do I have to say,
If feelings are forever lost and gone?
My once strong bones turned brittle and broken
from the pain that I have not understood.
About how these words are once were spoken;
If only I could, if only I should.
If only all this time I stayed awake,
This episode would have never happened.
Of letting my fragile heart drop and break
Hope this hurt has finally come to end.
With this damaged heart I can't hear a beat,
But what do I care if I can still breathe?
WOW IT WAS AMAZING!! FRIKIN AWESOME!!
