"even after (the end of time)"
she fills this hole,
in my black heart.
holds me when i'm cold,
keeps me from falling apart.
she loves me too,
one of the few.
together forever,
departing never.
she makes me so happy,
and doesnt have to try.
this isnt free,
but it something money can't buy.
i have her heart,
and she has mine.
we promised each other,
even after the end of time.
(love poem)
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(love poem)
by MyEmoLuverJodi on 07-23-2008 11:00 pm
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Eh.*
by Jackie xx Jaded on 07-24-2008 1:45 am
Not the best.
But there's no cutting.
So, I guess that's progress.
Keep working on it. You'll get it eventually. (:
But there's no cutting.
So, I guess that's progress.
Keep working on it. You'll get it eventually. (:
Two single hearts on fire; currently on the wire.
As inhibitions fade, a focused moment made.
Bruises & bitemarks say, "Takes one to bring the pain."
Passion lies in screams of estacitic dreams.
As inhibitions fade, a focused moment made.
Bruises & bitemarks say, "Takes one to bring the pain."
Passion lies in screams of estacitic dreams.
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Re: (love poem)
by lilemogurl477 on 07-25-2008 5:59 am
MyEmoLuverJodi wrote: "even after (the end of time)"
she fills this hole,
in my black heart.
holds me when i'm cold,
keeps me from falling apart.
she loves me too,
one of the few.
together forever,
departing never.
she makes me so happy,
and doesnt have to try.
this isnt free,
but it something money can't buy.
i have her heart,
and she has mine.
we promised each other,
even after the end of time.
awwww i love this one like ur other one
+Lil~Natsume~In~Luv~4~Eva+
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by Unforgiveable on 07-25-2008 12:31 pm
Your really good. Keep up the good work.
Every wish becomes a curse
Every curse becomes a blessing
Every curse becomes a blessing
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by helven on 07-25-2008 5:06 pm
I wouldnt say it's better
But it is an improvement on other you have written
I really think you could win a heart with this poem.....
But it is an improvement on other you have written
I really think you could win a heart with this poem.....
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by MyEmoLuverJodi on 07-26-2008 12:41 am
helven wrote: I wouldnt say it's better
I really think you could win a heart with this poem.....
i already have my girlfriend, thats enough for me (>///_^)> thanx though
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