ode to my razer blade

ode to my razer blade

by aj1994 on 07-13-2008 1:18 am

u r the only one who matters
cuse u r the only one who is there
u talk away the pain
every slice
every splatter
u take care of me
cut...cut...cut
blood...blood...blood
splater...splatter...splatter
all bad is gone
for a moment i can breath
u give me breath
u make this life bareable
if only for the moment

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by xHeartBrokenxx on 07-13-2008 11:35 pm

that is the same way i feel when ever I would cut myself i stopped cutting becaz of my girlfriend but ever since she broke up with me ive never been the same i want to go back but have mixed feelings about is i am trying to say you should not cut your self we should get to know each other :]

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by KittensKill on 07-13-2008 11:37 pm


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by deademo2 on 07-21-2008 10:38 pm

exactly how i feel.
good job

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by Jackie xx Jaded on 07-24-2008 1:02 am

Cutting poems are lame.
Cutting isn't cool.
I'm not trying to put you down.
But the life you live is short.
If you want your poems to be recognized & seen, then you need to be unique.
There are handfuls of poems like yours on this site. Stand out. Write something original. (:
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wow

by emochick2013 on 07-24-2008 1:09 am

I can totally relate to this keep writing

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by KittensKill on 07-24-2008 1:10 am


emo is the music, scene is the fashion

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by cutiepiex0x0 on 07-24-2008 1:55 pm

not to be mean but A. that was some funny shit B.go get help cause that poem made you sound crazy
You think your such a badass, but your really just a a fatt ass.
haha my wit
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Re: ode to my razer blade

by Jackie xx Jaded on 07-24-2008 2:09 pm

aj1994 wrote: u r the only one who matters
cuse u r the only one who is there
u talk away the pain
every slice
every splatter
u take care of me
cut...cut...cut
blood...blood...blood
splater...splatter...splatter
all bad is gone
for a moment i can breath
u give me breath
u make this life bareable
if only for the moment


Also, it's you, you're, take not talk, splatter not splater, breath & breathe are different, & it's spelled bearable. Have a nice day. (:
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Re: wow

by ZRC on 07-24-2008 4:16 pm

emochick2013 wrote: I can totally relate to this keep writing


YOU WRITE THE SAME EXACT THING EVERY FUCKING TIME. WHAT THE HELL.
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Re: wow

by Jackie xx Jaded on 07-24-2008 4:19 pm

ZRC wrote:
emochick2013 wrote: I can totally relate to this keep writing


YOU WRITE THE SAME EXACT THING EVERY FUCKING TIME. WHAT THE HELL.

Lmao.
I love you for that. (:
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by Nancy16 on 07-25-2008 2:38 am

well i think is really good
i like it

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Re: ode to my razer blade

by lilemogurl477 on 07-25-2008 4:56 am

aj1994 wrote: u r the only one who matters
cuse u r the only one who is there
u talk away the pain
every slice
every splatter
u take care of me
cut...cut...cut
blood...blood...blood
splater...splatter...splatter
all bad is gone
for a moment i can breath
u give me breath
u make this life bareable
if only for the moment

wow... i always feel like that wen i cut myself... i fell better that my pain as past out and i could just relax. Smile
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