another emo poem...

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another emo poem...

by MyEmoLuverJodi on 07-23-2008 4:42 pm

"teenage suicide"

im not okay,
its all a lie.
nothing left to say,
just wanna die...

i know you "love" me,
it's all been said.
but by the time you see,
i'll already be dead...

i love you,
i love you,
but you don't care.
so here i lie,
inside a world,
i no longer have to bear...
"The raining only starts when you go away"
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by ZRC on 07-23-2008 5:43 pm

saying this basically asks for a foot in the ass. I don't like it because of the theme.
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by Jackie xx Jaded on 07-24-2008 1:29 am

Not original.
Write something unique. :/
Two single hearts on fire; currently on the wire.
As inhibitions fade, a focused moment made.
Bruises & bitemarks say, "Takes one to bring the pain."
Passion lies in screams of estacitic dreams.

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by KittensKill on 07-24-2008 1:35 am

what they said.

emo is the music, scene is the fashion

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by MyEmoLuverJodi on 07-24-2008 2:03 am

Jackie xx Jaded wrote: Not original.
Write something unique. :/

umm i wrote this off the top of my head...
"The raining only starts when you go away"
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by cutiepiex0x0 on 07-24-2008 1:37 pm

ehh
You think your such a badass, but your really just a a fatt ass.
haha my wit
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