invisibly Shaken(Please comment)

invisibly Shaken(Please comment)

by emochick2013 on 07-24-2008 12:52 am

My friends say
They’re proud of me
For taking our break up
So casually
But they don’t see
What lies beneath my smile

It appears
That I’m okay
That I moved on
When you walked away
But the truth is
Since you said goodbye

I’m invisibly shaken
And quietly breakin’
Desperately takin’ one breath at a time
Beneath this composure
I know it’s over
Baby I’m dying cause you can’t be mine
But I will never show the toll it’s taken
Cause I’m invisibly shaken

If it looks
Like I don’t care
Like it’s not killing me
Seeing you here
And hearing you say
You want to try us again

Believe me, it ain’t easy
Being this cool
But too many times girl
I’ve been your fool
And I know I’d just
End up here again

Invisibly shaken
And quietly breakin’
Desperately takin’ one breath at a time
Beneath this composure
I know it’s over
Baby I’m dying cause you can’t be mine
But I will never show the toll it’s taken
Cause I’m invisibly shaken

Baby I’m dying cause you can’t be mine
But I will never show it’s taken
Cause I’m invisibly shaken

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by KittensKill on 07-24-2008 1:20 am

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by GlassTears on 07-24-2008 7:54 am

I love this poem...it makes so much sense to me...let me give you some advice though, more than likely they'll come back, but if and when they do, don't EVER take them back. My theory is don't ever give your heart
away, cause you might not get it back.

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