Burnt Wings(plz comment)

Burnt Wings(plz comment)

by GlassTears on 07-23-2008 10:59 pm

Misquided people
Believed everyones lies
But they didn't give her a chance
To tell the truth

Her dream was to fly away
And never be seen again
But the day she was caught
She was grounded once again

She tried to tell her story
She tried to tell the truth
But all the people around her
Just desribed her as a spoof

They burned her dreams
And ripped her wings
She had no hope
And she could not fly

They chained her wrists to the ground
To make sure she wouldn't escape their grasp
The locked shackles to her legs
So she could never run

And, since there she sat powerless of her fate
She realized
She was the only one not happy
She was the only one faking the smile

Then she finally broke lose
And found the ashes to her wings
She still had one shackle on her leg
That she had to drag along

The shackle was so heavy
It eventually made her fall
She screamed in pain
She fell on glass

She began to pick the broken glass
From her shredded skin
When she noticed
It was her broken dreams

She sewed up her broken wings
With old branches and dead leaves
She glued her dreams back together
With the cold blood, leaking from her heart

Finally one day
She climbed up and old cliff
And under and old oak tree
She placed a note, her sewn up wings, and glued together dreams

She walked to the egde
To everyone else it looked like she was falling
But to her she was finally doing what she'd always wanted to
She was finally flying

BY: xXGlassTearsXx


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by KittensKill on 07-23-2008 11:39 pm

PLZ COMMENT???

Hows this:

YOU ARE A COMMENT WHORE.

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wow

by emochick2013 on 07-24-2008 1:30 am

this poem i cryed i love keep writing!

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Re: wow

by KittensKill on 07-24-2008 1:34 am

emochick2013 wrote: this poem i cryed i love keep writing!
STOP CRYING, SILLY BINT.

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thnx

by GlassTears on 07-24-2008 7:21 am

Thnx for the comments every1!

Have a nice day. Very Happy


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by KittensKill on 07-24-2008 7:25 am

I BITE.

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by cutiepiex0x0 on 07-24-2008 2:10 pm

KittensKill, you make me smile lol
You think your such a badass, but your really just a a fatt ass.
haha my wit
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