Face Your Fears

Face Your Fears

by LostInTransition on 07-21-2008 2:02 pm

Lonely from the beginning,
Just waiting for his death,
Hoping for that single moment,
At which he would loose his breath.

Sitting in a corner of darkness,
Thinking what went wrong,
Why was he stuck in this world?
He had waited far too long.

At the start he feared death,
Just thinking of the pain,
But he’d had enough of all the tears,
He had no one else to blame.

He was only fourteen years old,
But life, was the thing he couldn’t bear,
He only thought of what people would say,
He only then realized no one would care.

He discovered all types of objects,
The kind that hurt the most,
He gathered knives and pills,
The thing he feared nearing close.

His body was full of stories,
Each scar symbolizing a broken heart,
Each slice was nothing,
Compared to all that hurt.

They say he did it laughing,
Laughing at the pointless years,
Because repeated all over his body,
Were the words: “Face Your Fears”

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by PlushDevil on 07-21-2008 2:12 pm

that was amazing.

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by GlassTears on 07-23-2008 9:14 pm

very deep...i loved it


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by ilovemyemokid13 on 07-23-2008 10:02 pm

Shocked man that was good! Especially the ending... I wrote one about a girl jumping in front of a car. It's in here somewhere.... "Poem Quartet by ilovemyemokid13"
It's raining, it's pouring, he's no longer adoring. I'll lay in bed, bag on my head, and hope to die by morning.
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by cloudedbubbles on 07-23-2008 10:07 pm

Wow. That was really good. I loved the ending. Sad, but I like that.
My heart only hurts when it's beating,
And my mind only screams when I'm thinking.
All I want is to escape my reality.

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by emogirlxo on 07-23-2008 10:13 pm

I thought that was amazing, wow
You come to me with scars on your wrist
You tell me this will be the last night feeling like this
I just came to say goodbye
I didn't want you to see me cry, I'm fine
But I know it's a lie...

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by Nooneknowsher on 07-23-2008 10:29 pm

wow that was really good very meaningful.
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by LostInTransition on 07-23-2008 10:44 pm

Wow...I'm really surprised by all of your responses
Thats a boost to the ego :]

Thanks again everyone!

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