attempt at photography

attempt at photography

by seepingwound on 07-12-2008 5:09 pm

pictures of the lake by my house



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by FortuneSpasm on 07-12-2008 6:54 pm

I don't really like the two first pictures; the perspective/objective together with the light background making the trees in the foreground too dark, especially around the edges. too much kontrast in the second one? picture #3 feels much better; the wide perspective together with the soft green light is very appealing, just a little too much kontrast. the fourth pic is also good, but I don't like the colours as much as in the third.
picture #5 is gorgeous, even though it has a limited background. very nice sepia tone ;]
the last pic, #6,... exposure problems? nawt nice ;/

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by seepingwound on 07-12-2008 7:20 pm

FortuneSpasm wrote: I don't really like the two first pictures; the perspective/objective together with the light background making the trees in the foreground too dark, especially around the edges. too much kontrast in the second one? picture #3 feels much better; the wide perspective together with the soft green light is very appealing, just a little too much kontrast. the fourth pic is also good, but I don't like the colours as much as in the third.
picture #5 is gorgeous, even though it has a limited background. very nice sepia tone ;]
the last pic, #6,... exposure problems? nawt nice ;/


that's quite observant,
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by BLiNdFaNaTiC on 07-12-2008 10:31 pm

woah
thats not an attempt those are skills
keep it up its amazing!

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by patrikka on 07-13-2008 5:40 am

I really really like the 3rd one but the 4th one is way too *greeny*.
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by loopyloz4eva on 07-13-2008 6:04 am

i really really like them if u gave me a camera id probably turn it into a cannibal giraffe im bad at photography lol u r totally awesome at this, do more pictures coz there awesome

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by FortuneSpasm on 07-13-2008 6:57 am

patrikka wrote: I really really like the 3rd one but the 4th one is way too *greeny*.

agreed, or at least too 'blue'. a lot less saturation would be better, together with less contrast but higher contrast intensity (to keep that 'dreamy' atmosphere). and a warmer, more natural hue:



or at least, if you want to keep that blue tone in the picture:

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by xXxATLxXx on 07-14-2008 10:53 am

the third one is really pwetty!!!i really like them!!
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by jukeboxJAZZ on 07-17-2008 1:51 pm



my favorite one is the 5th one. it's really interesting. the near and far perspective is really interesting, and the sepia tone reminds me of home. it's a comforting, but sad picture.

the guy from sweden, urrgh, i forgot his name, is right. the first two aren't especialy nice. they're a little boring and they don't make me want to look at them very long.

i like how you take photos from different angles. variety is fantastic when it comes to photography. it's extremely important to be open minded and question the photos you take. notice things.

take more pictures and post again real soon. =]
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by xxABrockxx on 07-17-2008 1:54 pm

I really like the 5th one Smile
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by Lillith on 07-20-2008 2:07 am

i realy like the 1st and the 2ed. it was realy nice work. i realy like how you made them dark and had some purple in there. you do realy good work. wish i could. i wouls so mass it up if i was to try. what i have..lol..hope to see more..nice work.. Wink Smile

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by InnocentDemon on 07-20-2008 1:20 pm

I love the first one. The third one was good too. I didn't like the fourth picture though, the color looked messed up, too.. "blueish".
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by michaelused on 07-20-2008 10:13 pm

i really loved those pictures Very Happy
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by Gasolinerainbows on 07-20-2008 11:33 pm

That's much better than an attemp. How much photoshop did you use though?
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by XxMinedWeaverxX on 07-21-2008 6:51 am

OMG I love the 3rd one.
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