Poetry by Last;;Lullaby

Poetry by Last;;Lullaby

by Last;;Lullaby on 07-06-2008 6:34 pm

This is a poem I wrote for the guy I am in love with.
He is my best friend and I would give my life for ths boy.
He's so sweet and thoughtful.
Unfortunately he moved to Florida when we were in 6th grade.
So about a week ago I wrote him a poem so let me know what you all think.




Would it be crazy
if i said
i would give up the rest of my life
to have just 5 minutes with you?
what if i said you were my sun
and moon
and the heavans?
what if i told you
you were beautiful,
no matter your faults
or imperfections?
if i told you
you’re perfect
just for being you,
would you believe me?
Would it be crazy
if i said
I love you?




I was reading 30 Days of Night and had an urge to writea vampire poem.
So I did, I also needed another poem for my Eng 9 poetry calendar.
Enjoy!




A broken door.
The smell of blood,
no one’s here.

I walk inside
to see a vase
shattered,
smashed
and out of place.

Decaying stairs
and unkempt drawers.

I slip into a basement suite,
much tidier
and more complete.

The wafting smell
of blood and gore
grows stronger still.

There’s so much more
than meets the eye.

A door slams shut,
my heart quickens pace
and I feel the sweat
run down my face.
“It’s just the wind,”
I tell myself
but, then I swore
I heard a shelf,
come crashing down
from up above.

Footsteps creaking
on the stairs.
On the back of my neck
stood up the hairs.

I hid behind an old bookshelf
and tried to cover up myself.

Through the door came a slender man,
scrawny with no sign of a tan.
The smell of blood grew stronger still.
This room’s turning into a living hell.

His eyes were red
with years of death.
He looked at me,
right through the shelf.
He smiled slyly
with his twisted mouth.

Fangs!
I swear I’d seen them there.
He smashed the shelf
to get to me.
I sobbed and cried
and clutched my knees.

He smiled again
and grabbed my throat.
He squeezed so hard,
I’ve started to choke.

He smiled so sweetly
and whispered in my ear,
“I’m sorry,
but this may hurt my dear.”

I felt a small prick,
then it started to sear.

He tossed me aside
and I saw the small pool.
So much of my blood.
How could I’ve been such a fool?

I started to sink
into a quite despair.
The blood on my neck
clinging to my hair.

As he walked out of the room
he turned and he said,
“Tomorrow you’ll wake up
and you will be dead.”

Inside of this house
it’s not empty you see.
Here lived a vampire
and now lives me.




So in Eng. 9 we had to do a poetry calendar with 6 of our own poems/songs.
This is the song I wrote for January.
(I put it in Jan because it's my fave and Jan is my birth month).
It doesn't really have a title.
So the one it says is just a temporary until can think of something cool
I hope you like it.
I can't wit to get together with my friend and put music to the lyrics.




You’re right
We’re all a little insane
Wandering inside our minds
It’s tearing us apart this time
But through it all I need you here
My snow white angel
You my dear

Fears of this tainted world
All of them coming unfurled
I’m screaming for you
Now you see
My fear is taking hold of me

-chorus-
[Inside the hollows of your mind
Where you can lose all track of time
The bleeding hearts
And all your fears
These walls protecting you my dear
But now I see it’s you I fear]


With your
Promises of protecting
Failure and my broken wings
I’m falling from these dark rooftops
The grounds my only way to stop

-chorus-

Could you
(could you)
Bid my blood to run
(blood to run)
I beg my broken heart to beat
(heart to beat)

I’m going out of my mind
It’s merely just a matter of time
Losing all control of me
Coming undone
Just wait and see
(wait and see)

-chorus-

You’re right
We’re all a little insane




This is a poem I wrote for Eng 9 when we had to do poetry calendars.
The title is jst temporary 'cause I can't think of one I really like.
It's based off of a pic that hopefully I can put up later but right now I am too lazy. =]
So enjoy the poem and try to imagine your own image and check back when I get the pic up and see if yours was close to the real pic.




Inside of a tower
a top of a hill
there once lived a wizard
he gave me a chill

One dark stormy night
I awoke with a fright
to the sound of lightening
and an awful sight

A top of the tower
the wizard stood still
the cries from his being
were loud and shrill

He chanted and screamed
a frightening case
but more frightening still
was the look on his face

Twisted, enraged
but crazier still
I don’t know how to put it
but it gave me the chills

From his fingertips
spouted colours galore
blues, greens and a silver dragon I’m sure
but there was yet more

They started to form a shape
I swear
a brilliant balloon
filled with hot air
All about it
the stars did dance
and icicles fell
but missed him by chance

The last thing I saw
on that dark stormy night
an enormous explosion
of colourful light.




This I wrote back in 6th grade and i'm still really happy with it.
Enjoy.




Inside the grasping fingers
Of my hollow mind
A dark place I rarely see
Doors lead in all directions
Beckoning me ever forward
A path leads me to a small swirling pond
Surrounded by bushes
And the pine trees of forever
I search all the doors
Inside each is a peace of me
My personality, my looks
My always flowing thoughts
In my mind it smells of rose
Long since forgotten
I return to the pond
I sit, lights begin to dance
Around me
They join in one
In the center of the pond
My heart, my mind, my soul
Are one




I had watched the sun set one night in 6th grade and then in the morning just before it rose my alarm clock went off for some unexplainable reason.
(it was set fr like 10 am, not 5 am)
I sat up grabbed my note pad and just started writing.
In the end I was dead tired but I love this poem and I hope you all enjoy it too.




I watch the sun set
and day become night
the sky become dark
and all is right

The sun hits the hills
in a golden spray
the sky turns purple
and soon to gray

No one can see
what I see now
so many stars
to many to count

So many souls
bursting out

In the dark I stand
no one to hold my hand
till shining daylight
signal to the end of night

In the sun I stand
till night comes again
till day becomes night
and all is right




This was another song I wrote for Eng 9.
I have to put this to music with one of my girls and iam so excited about it.
I wrote this for all the people out there who don't see how radtastic they really are.
So listen to what I hav to say and try to see how you glisten. ;]
Enjoy!




You tear yourself down
and shut yourself out
I wish you could see
that you’d figure it out
but you won’t see it
no you won’t listen
you’re perfect baby
see how you glisten

(chorus)
You try to run away
to get away from here
my pretty baby
what do you have to fear?
but you’re still tryin’ to run away
(you try to run away) x2
but you can’t get away
(no you can’t get away) x2

You try to hide out
to cover yourself up
to be discreet when
you quietly slip out
but you won’t see it
no you won’t listen
you’re perfect baby
see how you glisten

(chorus)

You still don’t see it
you still won’t listen
my pretty baby
oh how you glisten
you’re perfect you’ll see
one day you’ll see it too
but just for now babe
I’ll have to convince you

(chorus)

So jus for now babe
I'll have to convince you

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by BlankCanvas on 07-06-2008 7:17 pm

well i think that poem is great!
keep it up

-John

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by Last;;Lullaby on 07-06-2008 7:19 pm

BlankCanvas wrote: well i think that poem is great!
keep it up

-John


thanks =]

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by BlankCanvas on 07-07-2008 12:21 am

No problem, anytime

Would you mind if I show this poem to the girl of my dreams? :p

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by xXlove hurtsXx on 07-07-2008 12:41 am

Last;;Lullaby wrote: i would give up the rest of my life
to have just 5 minutes with you?
what if i told you
you were beautiful,
no matter your faults
or imperfections?


I like these parts the best ^_^
but it's a really good poem all together (=

yes, yes it is. thank you for noticing.

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by PapaPill on 07-07-2008 7:12 am

this gave me a lot of inspiration. great poem.

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by ilovemyemokid13 on 07-07-2008 1:52 pm

aww it's so full of fuzzy warm sweetness! like cactuar!

well maybe not that cactuar...

I love your poem!
It's raining, it's pouring, he's no longer adoring. I'll lay in bed, bag on my head, and hope to die by morning.
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by Last;;Lullaby on 07-23-2008 12:43 am

BlankCanvas wrote: No problem, anytime

Would you mind if I show this poem to the girl of my dreams? :p


omg totally go ahead =] i hope she likes it

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by Last;;Lullaby on 07-23-2008 12:44 am

xXlove hurtsXx wrote:
Last;;Lullaby wrote: i would give up the rest of my life
to have just 5 minutes with you?
what if i told you
you were beautiful,
no matter your faults
or imperfections?


I like these parts the best ^_^
but it's a really good poem all together (=


thanks =]

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by Last;;Lullaby on 07-23-2008 12:45 am

ilovemyemokid13 wrote: aww it's so full of fuzzy warm sweetness! like cactuar!

well maybe not that cactuar...

I love your poem!


lol i love the cactuar and thank you =]

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by Last;;Lullaby on 07-23-2008 12:46 am

PapaPill wrote: this gave me a lot of inspiration. great poem.


thats cool to hear =] and thank you

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HA

by Last;;Lullaby on 07-23-2008 1:02 am

I destroy merges I no like!

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HA2

by Last;;Lullaby on 07-23-2008 1:07 am

I destroy more merges I don't like

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by KittensKill on 07-23-2008 1:11 am



Jenze is my n00b, so fuck off. MetalSuicide is my n00blet in re-training.. so be nice to him.. or he'll banhammer you.

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by Last;;Lullaby on 07-23-2008 1:11 am

3rd merge down!

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