So I finally worked up the nerve to share some of my poems and here they are. I don't really think I'm that good to be honest but I still like to write. Also most of my poems, at least at the moment, are untitled. Enjoy, or don't, whichever you choose.
Untitled
Bound by my misery
Bound by my fears
Bound by my panic
And bound by my tears
Afflicted by these feelings
Bound here, I can't leave
I can never start healing
Trapped here, I can't breathe
Abject and broken
Here I lie
Staring up
At the falling sky
As I suffocate
I make a wish
I wish it never
Had come to this
Untitled
In this war I want to be a fatality
In life I want to dream a reality
Where I can be everything I'm not
Where there is no war to be fought
And I wish I could disassociate
From this place where I can't relate
I want to fall into a dream
I want to feel serene
Untitled
With the breaths of hostile rumors
This world kills me like a tumor
And the shreds of forsaken love notes
Whose words strike where they hurt most
When my plastic smile melts away
As the sun brings forth the coming day
Synthetic hope of desired change
Will be the only thing to remain
Those are just a few, perhaps I'll post more later.
Poetry by foreverxnever
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foreverxnever - Almost Emo
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owwh!
very gd job
i dunno why i think that we have just the same style
in writing poems?!
coz alot f sentences and words are just the same of mine
but i don't show it here coz people here are very mean and never
give you good comments
anyway..cool job man
very gd job
i dunno why i think that we have just the same style
in writing poems?!
coz alot f sentences and words are just the same of mine
but i don't show it here coz people here are very mean and never
give you good comments
anyway..cool job man

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emoXdeath - Scene Kid
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Kyesha - Registered
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XLoveLovesickX - Registered
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