Poetry by Shygirl

Poetry by Shygirl

by ShyGirl on 10-08-2008 7:28 pm

I'll add more later
(I know I'm not that good, opinions are welcome.)

1)
Breathe in
Tap your fingers against the desk
listening to that same song
think about the day
the good
the funny
smile
don't think about the bad
forget it
relieve the stress
breathe out
I'm so sick and tired of being sick and tired.

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by GlassTears on 10-08-2008 7:30 pm

Short and simple but very good.


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by Nintendo on 10-08-2008 7:30 pm

*rapes poem*


I love it. :3
What will it take for you to understand?
This is something the doctors just can't fix.


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I'm sure the hobos can find a public restroom, and "get jiggy with it"

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by ShyGirl on 10-10-2008 7:50 am

Thanks (:
I'm so sick and tired of being sick and tired.

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by kissing coffins on 10-10-2008 7:58 am

loved it! its awesome Smile

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by shadowslight on 10-10-2008 1:02 pm

simple...yet awesome...good work Smile
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by ShyGirl on 11-09-2008 2:21 pm

2)
A needed change
no more time for procrastination
baby steps are welcome
just get started
don't worry about the mocking eyes
the disapproval
they don't matter
keep your head up
your eyes forward
focus on the future
something that's all yours
I'm so sick and tired of being sick and tired.

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by Nintendo on 11-09-2008 2:39 pm

I'd tap that poem.


Mmmmmmhm.
What will it take for you to understand?
This is something the doctors just can't fix.


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by xxxbrittanyxxx on 11-09-2008 3:04 pm

Lol I like it =]
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by ShyGirl on 11-09-2008 7:42 pm

3)
Tick, tick
too much time to think
the past
the present
the future
too many what ifs
a mind that wonders
that thinks too much
people tell her not to worry
they say it will be okay
she thinks of the good memories
the fun times
with these thoughts she's at ease
her mind can rest



4)
So much for the future
the promises
the plans
liar
forget the past
you don't care
did you ever?
I was deceived
but I can see now
I've made up my mind
don't expect any more favors
I'm done
I'm so sick and tired of being sick and tired.

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by GlassTears on 11-09-2008 7:50 pm

I love 2 it's my fave. Good job Shy ^-^


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