^Yes you are
And you are open to critique from the very moment you post it. Being bitchy to critique is a great way to be hated.
Also, you're no "Queen" of anything.
What raid posts?
poems by emopoops AKA EMO QUEEN
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RE: poems by emopoops AKA EMO QUEEN
by emopoops on 09-23-2008 2:04 am
rnt u like a mod or something? why argue with you a bout me
its not like i know wat im doing.
its not like i know wat im doing.
u frikken fakes.
im the scene queen u should listen to me. shh no speak, FKn
im the scene queen u should listen to me. shh no speak, FKn-
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Re: RE: poems by emopoops AKA EMO QUEEN
by KittensKill on 09-23-2008 3:43 am
emopoops wrote: rnt u like a mod or something? why argue with you a bout me
its not like i know wat im doing.
1. yes, Nexus is a mod
2. why can't you use English?
3. Why must you write stereotypical crap?
4. anorexia is not sexy, so stop kidding yourself
5. stop trying so hard to fit the stereotype.
emo is the music, scene is the fashion
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by emopoops on 09-23-2008 9:56 pm
noones trying to hard to be somehting they arent but you.
[size=7]here is another poem amde for the rest of the people the understand emo:
the lies are otriciois the night is decending upon all of us
how can the only truth be slnanted much like everything as another time of day the world makes a fuss.
denying the only caught up feeling i spill my insanity all over the floor
on a trip as i call my extra sensative emo bitch out to play
the hormonal heartbreak it denied last time wasnt good enough for anyhting and the only one who saw wat was really happening belay all the sarcasm should not have benn faked[/size ]
the sick the sorry the hopeful with out all the scene glory
what are they going to do when somhting big hapens to force the truth on them
as the light comes everyday to let you see
let you see wat i see setting the truth free.
doesnt it matter anymore wat hopefuls bring in the stench of a dead slammed door
does it even matter whats going on witht he sour tastes the dead bring upon us as histerically so called steroetypical delusioncal hauntings
whats going to happen then when someone figures out its really effecting people
all these fake lies used as tauntings.
bbbby dont be sad he says as i cry my eyes out one more time yesterdays ago
th e feeling sorry for my self is taken from me by others as tools to make themselves.
the insanity i once held as my own was someone else dna
everyone knows the dumb left over creative stocking of the lies was release just as people take there news to the other forums. just as others cry inside and cant let go
and feel like slaves.
[size=7]here is another poem amde for the rest of the people the understand emo:
the lies are otriciois the night is decending upon all of us
how can the only truth be slnanted much like everything as another time of day the world makes a fuss.
denying the only caught up feeling i spill my insanity all over the floor
on a trip as i call my extra sensative emo bitch out to play
the hormonal heartbreak it denied last time wasnt good enough for anyhting and the only one who saw wat was really happening belay all the sarcasm should not have benn faked[/size ]
the sick the sorry the hopeful with out all the scene glory
what are they going to do when somhting big hapens to force the truth on them
as the light comes everyday to let you see
let you see wat i see setting the truth free.
doesnt it matter anymore wat hopefuls bring in the stench of a dead slammed door
does it even matter whats going on witht he sour tastes the dead bring upon us as histerically so called steroetypical delusioncal hauntings
whats going to happen then when someone figures out its really effecting people
all these fake lies used as tauntings.
bbbby dont be sad he says as i cry my eyes out one more time yesterdays ago
th e feeling sorry for my self is taken from me by others as tools to make themselves.
the insanity i once held as my own was someone else dna
everyone knows the dumb left over creative stocking of the lies was release just as people take there news to the other forums. just as others cry inside and cant let go
and feel like slaves.
u frikken fakes.
im the scene queen u should listen to me. shh no speak, FKn
im the scene queen u should listen to me. shh no speak, FKn-
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by DarkeningShadows on 09-23-2008 10:23 pm
Are you high?
..No,sorry,bad joke.
But seriously,I don't understand your poetry.
Please learn to spell correctly and to use English correctly.
Also don't type in super tiny itty bitty letters or else
nobody will read it.
Oh and learn to be polite.
..No,sorry,bad joke.
But seriously,I don't understand your poetry.
Please learn to spell correctly and to use English correctly.
Also don't type in super tiny itty bitty letters or else
nobody will read it.
Oh and learn to be polite.
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RE: poems by emopoops AKA EMO QUEEN
by emopoops on 09-25-2008 12:25 am
im not being inpolite
i dont know where you are COMING FROM.
i dont know where you are COMING FROM.
u frikken fakes.
im the scene queen u should listen to me. shh no speak, FKn
im the scene queen u should listen to me. shh no speak, FKn-
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by Tom on 09-26-2008 6:16 pm
I couldn't read anything. Yes, I have bad sight but everyone else is complaining about it too. That means you're either:
A: Too insecure to let anyone read your poems
or
B: Just plain being annoying.
I think it's B.
A: Too insecure to let anyone read your poems
or
B: Just plain being annoying.
I think it's B.
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by Jackie xx Jaded on 09-26-2008 6:23 pm
Please don't feed the troll. It's what she wants.
Two single hearts on fire; currently on the wire.
As inhibitions fade, a focused moment made.
Bruises & bitemarks say, "Takes one to bring the pain."
Passion lies in screams of estacitic dreams.
As inhibitions fade, a focused moment made.
Bruises & bitemarks say, "Takes one to bring the pain."
Passion lies in screams of estacitic dreams.
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by infinitesilence on 09-27-2008 1:54 pm
Well, um.
I can't critique it if I can't read it. ^^
I can't critique it if I can't read it. ^^
I'm just a love machine, feeding my fantasy, give me a kiss or three and I'm fine.
I need a squeeze a day, instead of the negligée, what will the neighbours say? <3
I need a squeeze a day, instead of the negligée, what will the neighbours say? <3
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RE: poems by emopoops AKA EMO QUEEN
by emopoops on 09-29-2008 6:01 am
there isnt anything to survive to
my bones exceptions
believe this lameness hurts
dont forget to create a rediculous piece of art that
resembles nothing then bleed from your nose
onto. your. shirt
figuritively speaking i cannot want to hear anyone else
this is a love poem i am not only for myself.
now can the stupid hearing aid and isolated stupidity be
recommended in the form of drugs forever?
now listen closely from 8 inches away
listen closely to everything not just this
that i have to say.
can you hear me
its not i its someone else
im reading my words as if i am
allowed to kill myself.
my bones exceptions
believe this lameness hurts
dont forget to create a rediculous piece of art that
resembles nothing then bleed from your nose
onto. your. shirt
figuritively speaking i cannot want to hear anyone else
this is a love poem i am not only for myself.
now can the stupid hearing aid and isolated stupidity be
recommended in the form of drugs forever?
now listen closely from 8 inches away
listen closely to everything not just this
that i have to say.
can you hear me
its not i its someone else
im reading my words as if i am
allowed to kill myself.
u frikken fakes.
im the scene queen u should listen to me. shh no speak, FKn
im the scene queen u should listen to me. shh no speak, FKn-
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by ZRC on 09-29-2008 8:30 pm
"my bones exceptions"
This makes...literally no sense. Also, in poetry, using words like lameness....not a good idea.
This makes...literally no sense. Also, in poetry, using words like lameness....not a good idea.
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by DarkeningShadows on 09-29-2008 9:55 pm
At least she's typing in normal size letters.
That's one step up.
That's one step up.
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by emopoops on 10-09-2008 9:15 pm
fo sho its like n00b season it comes with the good weather
october air barely gets in here
whats left over is stale stay sad ill cry a tear
so what my mouth tastes good on the left corner
it never would have been priceless last october
when the world was getting a little grosser
leading unto the torture
but when the whole thing collapsed like i wanted to on to mmy knees
when the words would not stop
like death was their only tease
but only one way ill ever know
how much love and hate makes me want to get, the. fk, out
and go.
is to listen to the other side of it
the side that doesnt get all hesitant
the side with sex appeal not dormotory morose wantings like all
this n00bish feelings strike up
when they come from the airwavees
and bring me nothing but terror.
october air barely gets in here
whats left over is stale stay sad ill cry a tear
so what my mouth tastes good on the left corner
it never would have been priceless last october
when the world was getting a little grosser
leading unto the torture
but when the whole thing collapsed like i wanted to on to mmy knees
when the words would not stop
like death was their only tease
but only one way ill ever know
how much love and hate makes me want to get, the. fk, out
and go.
is to listen to the other side of it
the side that doesnt get all hesitant
the side with sex appeal not dormotory morose wantings like all
this n00bish feelings strike up
when they come from the airwavees
and bring me nothing but terror.
u frikken fakes.
im the scene queen u should listen to me. shh no speak, FKn
im the scene queen u should listen to me. shh no speak, FKn-
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