paper hearts lie torn up on the sadest of days,
this is the day you chose to go away,
you left me heartbroken, i know you don't care,
but now it is hurting, this message i must share...
i love you still and it is valentine's day,
yet i hate you so much why didn't you stay?
is it just me or does this poem i wrote suck?
paper hearts
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paper hearts
by ravenx on 08-05-2009 6:48 pm
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by XxXLipslikeVenomXxX on 11-03-2009 8:20 pm
Don't fish. I thought it was good, but when you say is it just me or does this poem suck it kinda makes me wanna say yeah it does ya know?
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RE: paper hearts
by seepingwound on 11-03-2009 8:43 pm
no. your poem sucks my bawls.
learn how to spell.
then write something original and worth reading.
learn how to spell.
then write something original and worth reading.
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RE: paper hearts
by MelodyOfMalice on 11-04-2009 12:27 am
Yeah man, don't fish. Just makes you look as lame as your poem.
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by NiNi29 on 11-06-2009 10:41 pm
Your poem rocks i like it write more fucking haters dont gave attention to them they waste yur time....
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