pain

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life is murder, dieing sounds great but as long as the problems go away, time is like a bullet it goes away so fast but even the slowest most painful days go away soon. life is feeled with hate so much hate slashing at ur wrist and trying to get rid of the pain but only to find it makes things so much worse. you live your days slowly trying to take ur life away but only finding that it dosen't ever work because ur parents rush u to the hospital to be recovered.it hurts to live in pain but we all have it we just decide to take it in deferent ways from other people

i like to skate board some times and i play guitar(high electric...i like to hang out with my friends, i smoke some times. i like to bike... im in a band...called blood attack... im not single right now...

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by Amon on 12-13-2007 11:31 am

Well.Not exactly the best of works but work on it alright?Try Putting it in a nicer format first. Smile

Love wins.Love always wins.

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by emoxme on 12-14-2007 6:17 am

Heey, Nice poem:)
Realy I love it

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by emoskaterBEN on 12-14-2007 7:39 am

[b]hey i like ur poem nice work Very Happy

my signature is rubbish so blah

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by jack ass 1 on 12-14-2007 4:37 pm

HEY WHATS UP I DONT KNO YOU YOU DONT KNO ME SO HERE I GO I HAVE TO SAY THAT YOU ARE A GREAT POEM WRITER SO ................. YYEAH THATS ALL I HAVE TO SAY ............... Embarassed