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by RoyalpaiN on 09-30-2008 8:43 am

Sad heart please disguise
For I cannot hide
how I feel inside
Tears behind my eyes
My sad hearts capsized
Shipwrecked by the tide
My thoughts start to slide
Into a sunrise
Its there I escape
Like a bird in flight
There I feel the shape
of ships in the night
On a lost landscape
far away from sight
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by Roylance on 09-30-2008 8:51 am

Learn to spell.

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by Roylance on 09-30-2008 9:01 am

Yeah dude. "learn how to us COdes''" is epic fail after i just told you to learn to spell.

Kinda shitty comeback, i can't see any coding problems anywhere on my profile.

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by PissedOffPoet on 09-30-2008 3:28 pm

it's a fine poem, but it's not a sonnet. the only thing it has in common with a sonnet is that it has 14 lines.
Why is it that we, the mutes, cannot express our malcontent?

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by ZRC on 09-30-2008 6:24 pm

A sonnet has to start with a question, have two stanzas, and the second must answer the question, each line must be ten syllables long.
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