My new poem - your unwelcome embrace

Cutting poems are a little too numerous on this forum, I know, but I've never written one before and like alot of us can at least relate to this subject. I didn't put as much time and thought into this poem as I usually do, trying to write like THE PERFECT POEM (which NEVER turn out the way you want them, at least not for me)
let me also add I wrote this right after reading forbidden03's poem <3
tanx for the inspiration love ^_^ (I believe I already upped your karma, although I might up it again for reading my online journal!! lol) *hugs*


xXxyour unwelcoming embracexXx

Razorblade razorblade,
I'm swimming in confusion.
But every time I turn to you,
I feel your disillusion..

Embraced in your unwelcoming arms
Hot and cold mixed into one
Your unmerciful lips upon my skin
The parties just begun...

The bead of red, enough is said
The floor begins to tip.
The high won't last, better run away fast,
Your mind has already slipped

(I know this last part doesn't rhyme :/ but I thought it sounded ok
I'll change it and re-post)

Will you make that grave decision
To apply that perfect pressure
Or be strong enough to walk away
And leave your cold friend behind?

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Walking contradiction
(not the greenday song, this poems about my indecisiveness)

Dead eyes, so full of life
No reason to cry or every reason in the world?

Black heart, overflowing with love
Does it bleed because it's broken or cause it likes to?

Empty head, baring the burden of knowledge 
Is it oblivious to it's flaws or simply in denial?

Clumsy body, so graceful and light
Do all those scars give it character or reveal a mental illness?

Forboding storm cloud, so badly needed by the flowers
Do you stand in the rain cause its cool on your skin or because it hides the tears?