love

love comes love goes
the more you love the stronger it grows
it can be deep as an ocean
or shallow as a stream
you can love so much you burst at the seam
it is also a painfull thing
it causes so much pain in your heart
so you fall apart
for you are no longer sane
in that state you remain
until someone lifts you up and thats when you say
"with them i will stay"

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I like it. It's a cute concept. Good job.

this is sooo good

Concept, yeah, it's a'ight.
Obviously proper grammar, commas, periods, etc. would make this a lot better, but it's not terrible.