Just some Poems

Just some Poems

by blackholeXnoheart on 11-24-2007 2:44 pm

I write when I'm stressed out or really bored, so I hope these aren't too horrible. Some I like, some I don't. I just kind of want to hear everyone's opinions.



Tragic Mess
By: Corrie Mikel



I’m just a big
Tragic
Mess

Please, this is your WARNING
You may continue reading, but afterwards
I suggest you escape from me
Try to keep your distance

I’ve screwed up so many times
I’m worthless
I do so great
Then when it’s my time to shine
I die
Like a light bulb in a thunderstorm

No one truly needs me
I’ve been rusting away
Hiding in the dark corner
Unaware of life around me
I use to be so great

So useful
So needed
What happened?
I use to be the greatest tool in the world
When did people stop needing me?
I understand growing up
But that doesn’t mean you don’t need me
I need you to need me

Now, just because I said that
Doesn’t mean I want you to talk to me
Though I may want it
It’s best for you to keep your distance
I’m rather useless now
And I only screw up things


I’m just a big
Tragic
Mess
Hate is just heart
Without the R
And the letters all mixed up

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by blackholeXnoheart on 11-24-2007 2:45 pm

It can’t happen

Unreal
Has to be fake
When will I wake-up?
Can I freeze time?
I don’t want to leave
I grew up with these people
Whether I like them or not
I can’t imagine
Seeing them all one day
3 months later
Seeing none
Even some
I don’t want this
This roller coaster of a life to
End
Hate is just heart
Without the R
And the letters all mixed up

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by blackholeXnoheart on 11-24-2007 2:46 pm

Somehow as I was writing this one, it changed towards the end. Not quite what I had wished, but...


The One You Never Knew

I’m the one you never knew
The one you never paid attention too
The quiet one girl who sat behind you
Her hopes wasting away
Her dreams diminishing
Do you remember her?
I’m sure you don’t

I’m the one you never knew
The locker next door
The one you had lost touch with
I’m the one who shared your interests
I’m the one who was left behind

I’m the one you never knew
The one you passed by
Not even a glance
Or maybe, just maybe
I’m the girl, you looked at it
But never had a second thought
I’m the one who was there
Surrounded by the shadows

I’m the one you never knew
The quiet girl who understood you
The one who would have listened
And the one who did listen
I’m the one who heard all your wasteful drama and problems
I’m the one you looked past
I’m the one who you thought I would be nothing
The one who knew it would be okay in the
End
Hate is just heart
Without the R
And the letters all mixed up

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by blackholeXnoheart on 11-24-2007 2:46 pm

Uber Long


Sisters

You wanted one
You got one
Your stuck with me

Are you sad?
Have I disappointed you?
Do you
Hate me?
Love me?
Regret me?
Did I ruin your 5th birthday for you?
And all the ones after that?
Am I worthless?
Did I ruin your whole life?
Would it be better with out me?

I was born with you
I was happy with you

I was never sad because of it
You have never disappointed me
I knew when to trust
I hated when I felt worthless
I loved being with you
I regret the mean things I have done
Like popping off your Barbie’s head
Though it makes me laugh now
I’m sorry I ruined your birthday
I should have came a day earlier
Was I a good present?
The one you wanted?
Did I make your life worst or better?
I can’t imagine mine without you

I’m your sister
I got you
You got me
You were stuck with me
Talked for me
Taught me life
How to love
How laugh
How to not care
I would never want
Anyone else
Hate is just heart
Without the R
And the letters all mixed up

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by EmptyHorizon on 11-25-2007 3:26 am

wow. i really, really love these.
you're a beautiful writer. =]

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by blackholeXnoheart on 11-29-2007 9:41 pm

Ah, thanks! I'm not great though.

Sisters

You wanted one
You got one
Your stuck with me

Are you sad?
Have I disappointed you?
Do you
Hate me?
Love me?
Regret me?
Did I ruin your 5th birthday for you?
And all the ones after that?
Am I worthless?
Did I ruin your whole life?
Would it be better with out me?

I was born with you
I was happy with you

I was never sad because of it
You have never disappointed me
I knew when to trust
I hated when I felt worthless
I loved being with you
I regret the mean things I have done
Like popping off your Barbie’s head
Though it makes me laugh now
I’m sorry I ruined your birthday
I should have came a day earlier
Was I a good present?
The one you wanted?
Did I make your life worst or better?
I can’t imagine mine without you

I’m your sister
I got you
You got me
You were stuck with me
Talked for me
Taught me life
How to love
How laugh
How to not care
I would never want
Anyone else
Hate is just heart
Without the R
And the letters all mixed up

blackholeXnoheart
Almost Emo
 
Posts: 48
Joined: 24 Nov 2007
Age: 17
Gender: Female
Location: Land of OZ


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