im not sure..

i havent written anything in so long.
and i dont think i did very well this time.
its poem thats not really like a normal poem. so be flexible about it.
weird style.


Title Yet To Come?

i can make your heart feel warmer;
i can make your body feel pain;
i can make you wanna smile;
i can make you wanna scream;

love me, hate me.
forget me, forgive me.
whatever you decide to do,

i will always be out to get you.

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ooo this scares me... haha but its good!

*looks out the window* ... oh clear!!

ok nice one ;D ... shorty but ROCKS

It's good, most people don't go out of the "A, B, A, B" rhymes, i like to see different styles of poems .

I like this Very convincing ^_^