I Will Never Be Like You. [go easy on meh]

I Will Never Be Like You. [go easy on meh]

by xSUCCEXYxmuch on 12-05-2007 8:47 pm

Shaking torment
My breath can’t take every word that spits out
Like fire flickering through this dark tunnel
I cannot wait this long, it seeps through me
My grasps fail every time I try.
“Have you not tried enough?” you call out from behind me
A distant voice only I can recognize
I hang my head in shame as I reply no..
You’re always right.
…why can’t I be like you?

You’ll grab my arm as I stumble towards
What seemed to be a spiral of blood-spewed stairs.
You’ll lift me to your golden hill; the sun praises your every step
No shadow will linger, for they are afraid you will see them
And banish them forever in a righteous swing
So they hide in my temptations.
Thank you, I say, as your sweet lips curl into a smile.
And for that I cry; my bitter tears will see no end.
Love, I will never be like you.
All that speaks are those tender words
All that falls are your trembling lips
All that breathes is the lucid sky
And all that feels, all that aches, all that cries
Is your heart with mine,
Entwined;
We are..
Entwined.
Always and forever.

xxx

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by Little Soul on 12-05-2007 9:13 pm

wow.
this is really, really amazing jackie.
your a really great writer.
REALLY great.

wow.
<3
Tom wrote: Don't mess with Tess.

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by EmptyHorizon on 12-05-2007 9:23 pm

o.o i'm amazed
i didnt know you write
xD wow jackie

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