I Will Never Be Like You. [go easy on meh]

I Will Never Be Like You. [go easy on meh]

by xSUCCEXYxmuch on 12-05-2007 8:47 pm

Shaking torment
My breath can’t take every word that spits out
Like fire flickering through this dark tunnel
I cannot wait this long, it seeps through me
My grasps fail every time I try.
“Have you not tried enough?” you call out from behind me
A distant voice only I can recognize
I hang my head in shame as I reply no..
You’re always right.
…why can’t I be like you?

You’ll grab my arm as I stumble towards
What seemed to be a spiral of blood-spewed stairs.
You’ll lift me to your golden hill; the sun praises your every step
No shadow will linger, for they are afraid you will see them
And banish them forever in a righteous swing
So they hide in my temptations.
Thank you, I say, as your sweet lips curl into a smile.
And for that I cry; my bitter tears will see no end.
Love, I will never be like you.

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by Little Soul on 12-05-2007 9:13 pm

wow.
this is really, really amazing jackie.
your a really great writer.
REALLY great.

wow.
<3

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by EmptyHorizon on 12-05-2007 9:23 pm

o.o i'm amazed
i didnt know you write
xD wow jackie

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